A new story on Mrs Darcy's, dear readers. I bet you will enjoy Sophie's romantic novella "The Betrayal". It's completed.

Oh Sophie what a beautiful but tragic story. Wonderful work. We better not let Eli read it though she will be too bevastated to learn of Richards fait.

Very beautifully written Sophie, though sad! The reunited ending is most welcome, yet I just can't help but feel so sorry for all the lost years and the loss of their beloved family/friend. Oh well, nevermind, at least they are now happily together

Tragically beautiful! Great work Sophie! You have touched my heart.

I have no idea what to say......
Fantastic! Beautiful! Sad........ It was all this at the same time. I cried during the last to chapters/parts.

All the while reading this, I could see the scenes play before me in my head. It was like stepping into a film. My only objection is that I think the people are a little out of character (but thats just my opinion).

Thanks, this made my day!

Oh.. that hurt so good...