Oh Ellen! I loved it - it was just what I envisioned (or hoped) you would write - perfect and quite naughty! I loved the way you interspersed Austen's line with your own - very clever! Thanks!

Julie

The link to the comment thread of your story didn't work, Ellen, sorry! Mrs Darcy's too hasty sometimes. I fixed it. Melissa, thanks for pointing it out.

Ellen,
You, are a minx !!!!
I do so enjoy reading your saucy "Miss Bennett/Mr Darcy" narrations.
I must congratulate you on your very witty words

Bless your little heart, Sandra.

Just read 'the food of love' Looooved it!

Welcome, Helen, and thank you! There will be one more prequel upcoming.

My gosh, talk about steamy Ellen. These one-shots, should you do a million of them and I wouldn't get tired of reading haha. i feel so naughty lol, but not filthy, I I wonder how you manage that.=) Hunsford Revisited is my personal favourite.;)

Thank you, Kaya! Gosh, it's been ages since anyone has commented on my naughty short stories. Glad you're enjoying them!