Thanks for another great chapter. I love this Darcy. He is soooo strong. Of course, Darcy usually is. Cindy

Next timje indeed!

I love this story! This is my favorite characterization of the illusive and sexy Darcy!

After reading all 41 chapters practically non-stop I must practice patience to await the next chapter...

I'm falling in love with this Darcy over and over again.
Belen - I should thank you forever for this story!

Hey! Sorry to intrude...
But... how many chapter left? I adore this story!

Another one soon, very soon...

Chapter 42 is up, my dears. Enjoy!

R~ <-- still fanning...

I don't think I can think of anything new I can add to what I have already said about this story.
Lovely, warm, perfect!

Such a beautiful chapter. Thank you Belén for your wonderful story.


Cheers,
Julia B

Oh happy day! Darcy and Elizabeth are engaged!

Chapter 43 is up, my dears. Enjoy the sound of Frank Sinatra...

That was a beuatiful chapter. They seem so right together. So I gather that they will start living together now, good for them.
Many Thanks
Jo

This is the best modernized version of Pride and Prejudice that I have read!!! I check the sight everyday to see if a new post has been put on the webiste. I'm lovin' it!!!

I'll stay with you Will Darcy! Good grief, Lizzy... what's the problem with leaving Longbourne... that's why there are phones and you can always visit. I say, take the leap of faith! He's worth it. BTW, Belen, do you ride? Is that why you can decribe the horse circuit so well?

Christina

I used to ride and jump in the past, but it's been ages since I climbed atop a horse. I still follow jumping shows on TV, though. This story brings a lot of memories, as it was written while my daughter took riding lessons. I used to take her to the riding school and watch her practicing while I imagined those scenes between D&E.

Thank you for your comments, my faithfull readers!

Belén

Great Chapter, so loving! Can't wait for the new chapter! Grrr...why can't we all have a Mr. Darcy? LOL....
I hope ya'll have a Merry Christmas!

Merry Christmas to all of you, dear Belén and Belén-fans.

I wish to all of us a Mr Darcy for Christmas in whatever form it may be... and for the single ones, a real Mr Darcy, just like the one on this story. May our wishes come true

Chapter 44 is up, my dears. Enjoy!

I hope there are only happy chapters ahead-- as I love them as they discover each other in this new stage of their relationship. Happy, happy, happy! Thanks so much-- Merry Christmas!

Chapter 45 is up, my dears. Enjoy!

Lovely. Simply lovely. Thanks for the early New Year's Eve treat!

Great Chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

I love your story!! I have gotten to Chapter 45 and the story is over. I saw that your finished it, but I don't know how to get to the last chapters. Could you help me? I would love to continue reading this story.

Betty

Betty, the story is finished, but not all chapters have been posted. Patience, dear, I'll post the next soon enough.

Chapter 46 is up, my dears. Enjoy!

This story is one of my favourite. I'm so glad that Belen is posting it again. I really love this Darcy, and she can make interesting a sport that I didn't know before, now everytime there is a jumping show I watch it.
Thank you

Francesca

This story is fantastic, I love anything to do with Darcy & Elizabeth - keep up the good work can't wait for the next chapter

Not liking a controlling Darcy. Makes me wonder why he should behave so... No good can come of it. To some it might be interpreted as sweet, but after awhile, it becomes a negative force.

Chapter 47 is up, my dears. Enjoy!

Hi Renee,
I just read your story, and I couldn't stop reading it once I started. I simply love it, thank you so much for sharing it with us all.
I wonder what will happen in the next chapters, hopefully Darcy's possessiveness won't increase. I really love their relationships , can't say that I'm not jealous
Cathy
PS: How often do you update?

I'm sorry that I got your name wrong, sorry Belen.

I wish I was the author, Cathy!

Anyway, the story is finished, and I have all the chapters. I try to post as regularly as possible. If you scroll down the what's new page you will get a pretty good idea about the updat frequency.

Rush over to Belen's pages and enjoy chapter 48.

Fabulous Story! Best Ever! Can't wait for new chapters!

YAYAYAYA, Another chapter, I'm soooooo happy and it was a great chapter; I loved how Darcy made Lizzy comfortable before the races and also the ending of course.

Chapter 49 is up, my dears. Enjoy!

WOW!

I love that reconciliation, when they both humble themselves to each other, and how Will cries over her after their lovemaking. Isn't that beautiful?!
Thank you Belén!

OMG, Again lovely chapter, I was scared for a while when the tension escalated but it was sooooooooooo exciting and the make up sounded pretty good. LOL , Can't wait to find out is William's possessiveness will decrease.

I just started reading your sotry. I was hooked right away. Thank you! I love it!

That was a wonderful chapter, Belen. This story is still fresh and lovely even after many readings. Thanks for the great story and I can't wait to read the epilogue.

The epilogue has just been posted on belén's pages, my dears. Enjoy!

OMG, I'm so happy and so sad at the same time. It was a wonderful ending; i loved how you added parts of everyone's life, worst book ever:0))))) And he wins the golden medal, that's so great. Thank you so much for your brilliant story.

Love this story, Belén!!!
I am sure I will be reading it again and again and again...
And how nice that you put these words in the mouth of the sport journalist: "I'm sure that William wouldn't be having such a magnificent campaign without the support and encouragement of his wife."
Isn't it true that behind a great man there is always a great woman???

Thank you again for "Obstackles to overcome", Belén!

Bravo! Thank you Belen for this wonderful story. I have so enjoyed reading along and loving these characters. Loved our hero as he was not only "the hottest horseman" but a smoking hot and tender "Darcy." (And with all the FF Darcy's out there, that is quite an achievement, if I do say so myself!) I look forward to re-reading it in its entirity.

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Belén,
Thank you again for sharing this wonderful story with us. I've said it before, and I'll say it again (and again), OTO is one of my favorite JA FF stories.

And, many thanks to dearest Renée for hosting OTO at MrsDarcy.com.

Thank you again.

Cheers,
Julia B

Belén, Thank you for the wonderful witty epilogue. I loved all the bits & pieces--especially Mrs. Bennet as a fortune teller. I hope you are well and happy and thanks for being such a good writer!

Belen, What a wonderful story and what outstanding writing. I have now read this story twice -- the first time on another site because I couldn't wait for all the installments on the Mrs. Darcy site (my favorite JA FF site to date -- thank you Renee for the love that you bring to this site). So, I could see the skill of your editing as I re-read the new version of the story and found it just as fascinating as before, as well as more excellently crafted. Even though I am a woman very much in love with her husband, I just LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this version of Darcy. Amazing. As a horse lover, I could really appreciate the equestrian setting -- you made it seem so real. This is true of the entire story -- these characters leap off of the page. This was a deeply satisfying and enjoyable read -- warm and funny at the same time -- thank you so very much for sharing your gift of writing with us. I heartily recommend this story! I look forward to more! All the best, Donna

my favorite JA FF site to date -- thank you Renee for the love that you bring to this site

Thank you, my dear!

And don't worry about reading stuff elsewhere, I can so imagine your impatience!

I absolutely loved this storey!! I couldn't wait for each chapter to be posted. I love the regency stories, but the modern retellings are my most favourtie. Can't wait for another one like this. I will re-read this from start to finish many times.

Thanks everyone for your comments and thanks Renée for this site! Posting OtO here has been a wonderful experience.

Today I sent to Renée one of the vignettes I wrote for this story. Just another obstacle the for the Darcys to overcome!

Hugs
Be