Completely and utterly turned off? Methinks Darcy is made of sterner stuff than that Renee :P Trust Caroline to put her nose in where it clearly isn't required! Can't wait to see where this lil trip to San Fran takes us!

I hope Lizzy has some hot and passionate dreams with a certain gentleman clad in denim ! This Caroline is pretty ****** huh, and Collins, my my, such a thick fellow! Brilliant chapter again, Ellen!

Darcy is made of sterner stuff than that Renee

Wish the story was mine, Kate! It's Ellen G's though.

ugh! I can't wait to see what happens San Fran.! Please post soon! :)

Lol I know...I was just talking about your lil blurb on the "what's new" page :P

Here you go, ladies and gents, chapter 11 has just been posted. Enjoy!



Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeehaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Hey Ellen, great turn of events in this story. For some reason, I do not ever remember reading a story where Elizabeth went to London (oops, I mean SanFran) to "call" on Mr. Bingley. Can't wait for next chapter!

I am a sometimes poster but a most times lurker but I have de-lurked to say that I absolutely love this story. So thrilled to see another chapter.

Can't wait for Elizabeth to get to San Fransisco - watch out Bingley and Darcy!
You two are going to get it in the neck big time!!
Great to see Mary and Collins getting married - so right for each other!! Why did it not happen in the original? - they are so right for each other!

Great take on the original Ellen G.

Keep the chapters coming!

I thought I'd die when reading Collins' encounter with King!

And, boy, isn't Wickham sly! I wonder what Lizzy will do with him whne she finds out... After all she knows how to deal with horses in a certain way. I bet it'll at least cross her mind...

Whatever will happen, this Lizzy is when of my absolute favourite Lizzy's of them all. She's just so adorable.

Thanks for de-lurking, Deirdra! I, too, have always wondered why Mary & Collins weren't sent off together. I think, though, it might have been too "easy" a resolution, as JA preferred to make a point about how a woman like Charlotte needed to be practical in her choice of husband regardless of his obvious inadequacies. But since this is MY story....

I thought I'd die when reading Collins' encounter with King!
I hike with my two retrievers, and they and their doggy buddies are frequently set upon by Australian shepherds, which naturally -- and sometimes quite aggressively -- try to herd them. It's just what they do!

KayakChick, I'm as anxious as anyone to get Lizzy to SanFran, which is bound to open up all kinds of interesting possibilities.

Thanks Ellen, You are an amazing rider. Since the beginning of this story I have had a vision of Darcy wearing dusty chaps that I can't seem to shake. Not that I want to mind you.

Strange, Karen, I seem to be focused more on the Levi's!

try to herd them. It's just what they do!

Isn't nature a source for a whole lot of fun on occasion.

Nob hill indeed!!! I can't wait for Lizzy to visit the Bingleys. And this Mary is one sly sister and a go-getter!

I cannot wait for Lizzy's call! Please get rid of Wickham before he causes too much trouble. Thanks for the chapter, Ellen. I am so glad Collins is safely married!

Like everyone else, I can't wait till Lizzy gets to San Fran. But I wonder if Mr. Bennet will regret his decision to hire Denny.
And Mary, you go girl!

But I wonder if Mr. Bennet will regret his decision to hire Denny.

Hmmm, ya think?

Ellen, I can't wait for what happens next, particularly with Lizzy heading to SF. Great story. Roselle

Chapter 12 is up, my dears. Enjoy!

I absolutely loved the scantily clad Elizabeth on all fours in the bedroom! Loved even more Darcy's thoughts on the matter!!

Ellen, this story is coming along so nicely. I love that this "Hunsford" took care of Bingley and Jane without the long wait for Pemberley.

I wish Elizabeth were to be in San Francisco longer so that things could progress further between D and E. I can't wait for Will to propose--even if he does it poorly. I'm going to have a hard time not thinking Elizabeth a fool for not accepting. This Darcy is just ALL MAN!

Oh Ellen, you've turned up the heat in this chapter! Darcy has incredible restraint.

Two weeks to solve his Elizabeth "problem". I can't wait to see how he proceeds.

And Elizabeth achieved her purpose in visiting SF. What will Charles write?

Another great chapter.

Roselle

I will never get enough of a Darcy with a vivid imagination, particularly not if this imagination is put into his head by such a fine author as our Ellen G.

Elizabeth is too funny! I love how bold and direct she is! Can't wait to see if those daydreams get Darcy into more trouble!

*whistles* sexy Lizzy! Let's see what's up next from you Darcy! Am glad that Lizzy had the opportunity to inform Bingley abt Jane's situation. They should be heading off to the right direction unless Caroline has more tricks up in her sleeves!

Ellen, I haven't posted much here but I love this story. I loved that part where Elizabeth made Darcy uncomfortable with her shirt and sweat. Please post soon. Thanks again!!!

Hi Ellen, I cant wait for the next two weeks!!! Does that mean two more posts while they are in SanFran?! Thanks again...

Hi Ellen

Fabulous! Keep these chapters rolling in! Can't wait for more!

Thanks
Kate

Ooh I can't wait to hear how the next two weeks pan out! It's pretty obvious that Darcy doesn't realise how important he's already let Elizabeth become to him...

Ellen, From the amusing cleaning scene with Darcy to the visit to Nob Hill, I was on the edge of my seat. Great job for Elizabeth to clear things up for Charles and Jane... and I'm glad Lizzy has at least a new dress for the city! Very satisfying chapter!

I am enjoying this story so very much, Ellen.

Thanks, one and all. There will certainly be more action in San Francisco. And chocolate. There must be chocolate!

Chocolate & Darcy in the same chapter? Very good!! Caroline is so mean and I love it. Can't wait to see what happens with this letter. Thanks, Ellen. Such a good chapter!

Chapter 13 is up, my dears. Enjoy!

Thanks for another great chapter, Ellen. I loved the part about the chocolates and the fact that Darcy realized E couldn't afford them. I also liked the fact that Richard is handsome in your story. More tempting I think.

I have been unable to find chapter 13 when I follow the link. Help!

I just got it up by trying another browser and refreshing the page.

Great chapter Ellen, thank you! I just lurk around most of the time and don't express my thanks for the wonderful stories on this site nearly as often as I should, but I wanted to say I'm completely hooked on your story and am already waiting eagerly for the next installment:)

How can you not love a man who gives you chocolates!
I think the Colonel knows that Darcy is interested in Miss Bennet. Now if we could only get rid of Aunt Catherine, Caroline & Wickham!

Capital! capital! Capital!...

Thank you my dear for this amazing and amusing update...

Ima

Oh, I just loved him watching her in front of the chocolate shop! I felt myself agreeing with Mary when Elizabeth made uncharitable remarks about Darcy. I wanted to dress her down and tell her to open her eyes!

I found myself wanting an in depth description of how Col. Fitz. looked in his uniform. I can only imagine he was looking "sex-say"!!

Thanks, Ellen, for updating so soon.

Oh Darcy is so thoughtful! Chocolate indeed! I hope he will buck up soon, 2 weeks a very short time and flying fast! Is a proposal coming soon? Will Colonel aid him in his pursuit for Lizzy...and Ellen, pls post soon!

Yes, more chocolate, please! I always love the Colonel. Interesting twist with no Anne but Lady Catherine liking Caroline (blek!)

Wow, it seems that all I have to do is mention chocolate and the floodgates open!

Caroline & Mrs. de B are dangerous allies. I like it! They are going to make Will's life difficult, I hope. This was a fun chapter and I thought the candy was a very sweet gesture.

Ellen, you should have realized how chocolate would effect us...considering Eli and her oranges! We need more chocolate!!!

I can't wait to find out some more about this look!

I've just read all of the chapters posted. I admit that I had hesitated for quite a while to begin this as I am not a fan of westerns, but I am loving this story! I can see Lizzy as a practical, hard-working ranch owner's daughter, and of course Darcy is perfect as the rich but subtly down-to-earth owner of a huge, profitable ranch and investments. I can't wait for more! All of the characters are themselves and yet fit their new environments perfectly. Thank you!

Welcome, Rachel P.

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. I'll tell you a secret: I've never been a big fan of westerns, either. But I couldn't resist the thought of Caroline running a saloon or Lizzy as a tomboy who carries a revolver.

Stay tuned: I hope to have a new chapter up within a few days.

A warm welcome to you, RachelP. I've seen posts of you elsewhere, but I'm not well and cannot be online too often lately. I'm so happy you're enjoying the stories here on Mrs Darcy, and I hope to 'see' you frequently.

Ellen, your message cannot but lift my spirits! Can't wait.

Chapter 14 is up, my dears. Enjoy!