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Ayden's Ebb and Flow

Mrs Darcy has a wonderful weekend surprise for you, my dears. Chapter 1 of Ayden's classic modern retelling of P&P "Ebb and Flow" is up. Enjoy and give her some love.

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my oh my! what an intriguing beginning! I loved 'The Great Game' and I am falling under the spell of this one. And I appreciate Elizabeth being tall, as I am practically an amazon, it makes me feel as if I have a chance at Mr. Darcy... I do hope you post a new chapter soon, keep up the good work!

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I love, love, love this story! I am so happy it is to be posted here--- thank you so much for this! I'm so excited. For those that have yet to read it-- you are in for quite a treat! Love this Darcy and Elizabeth. Makes my heart go pitter-patter just to think about their chemistry.

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Ayden, I can't tell you how happy you have made me! I have always loved this story and am looking forward to starting it.

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I loved your last story and I am already hooked on this one. The imagery you create is just beautiful. Thank you so much!

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AMAZING, I LOVED IT. I can't wait for new chapters!!!!

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This, I believe was my first "mature" modern fan fic piece... and I was so spoiled to have it as such!

So for all of you who have not read this piece, you're in for a delightful treat. Of course, anyone who knows Ayden's writing is well aware of her ability to give us delicious things!

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Seems as if this one is going to rival if not surpass the great game - fantastic I love it already.

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Diane, Ebb and Flow and The Great Game are such very different stories and E&F is a much shorter story... both are fabulous in their own way... and Ayden's style is always so lush. You'll definitely enjoy!

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This is such a fabulous start! I'm definitely in for a treat, Ayden! Thank you so much for sharing!

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Great to be reading this again - it has always been one of my very favourites!! Thankyou!!

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Chapter 2 is up, my dears. Enjoy!

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So glad she took off her Manolo Blahniks before walking on the beach. Getting them sandy would be a crime! Yummy drink, yummy kissing.....nice long satisfying chapter!

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"William, nice boys don't kiss like this..."she whispered hoarsely.

"Oh yes they f---ing do!" he growled back, "Perhaps I'm not such a nice boy after all, Elizabeth."

oooh.... so yummy, your darcy certainly is mouth-watering! keep up the good work, ayden!

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This is going to be a good one I can tell! Singular choice in drink and men!!! Brilliant start

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I'm hooked as well now!

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Chapters 3 and 4 are up, my dears. Enjoy!

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These 2 chapters made me want to pack a bag & fly to Florida right now! Everything, including the rainstorm, just seems so delicious.

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oooh, the tension is getting to me! I loved these two chapters. Two is twice as nice as one, ayden! Keep it up!

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Sweeeeeeeeet!

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Wow, such sexual tension! They shld stop sparing and make the most out of it

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Chapter 5 is up, my dears. Enjoy!

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I like how Lizzy sorted out her thoughts and came to realise she's afraid. And Darcy! admitted to himself he's in love

I think there's a little blip in this sentence : "They staggered up the steps, Jane deliberately making lots of noise.....". It's Charlotte right? That said, I wonder when she and Charles will realise they are not meant to be, and will Jane be coming into this story. Can't wait for more!

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Chapter 6 is up, my dears. Enjoy!

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I forget who the cigar-owner is! Wickham? I am tickled that I don't remember this story asw well as I thought. That makes the re-read all the sweeter!No, Darcy is hardly satiated. I am guessing he is just getting started. Excellent chapter. It's just starting to steam up

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Yummy!!! (In more ways than one!)

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Perfect! Now they are all (or almost) over each other Hmm...the cigar guy is going to wreck some havoc i guess...can't wait to find out what's next!

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Chapter 7 is up, my dears. Enjoy!

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What's the connection betw Lizzy and Wickham?? On the other hand, glad that Jane is coming, she's going to meet Bingley i hope!

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Oooooh, Wickham is never good news. Thanks for bringing Jane to Florida. She can help Elizabeth not be alone with Darcy until she is ready. Thanks for the steamy chapter, Ayden!

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Ah, Ayden, you certainly make things heat up when our two lovebirds are alone together. Too bad it looks as though we'll have to suffer a little (please, only a little??? ) before we get some more.

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Surely it's time for another installment????

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You're darn right, darlin'. Chapter 8 is up. Check it out!

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Ayden, your Darcys (yes, plural - to cover several of your stories) are among my most favorite. If you have any extras about I would be pleased to have one! This story is one of my all time favorites. Can't get enough. Roselle

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Yet another brillant sassy chapter! And so that is the relationship betw Lizzy and Wickham....hope she will be able to outsmart that cad!!

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Yummy chapter, Ayden! Loved having Caroline getting an eyeful!! That was priceless.

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It seems it always falls to me to beg for another chapter. Ayden? Renee? Anyone out there?

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I'm so glad you do, dear! I'm frightfully busy, so I tend to focus only on my RL work. I promise though that I'll post first thing tomorrow.

Keep reminding me, it definitely helps!

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As promised, chapter 9 is up. Enjoy!

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Oops, forgot the link!

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Someone pls pass me a fan!!

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Indeed, Gio, I ought to have warned the dear readers...

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Another consummate consummation! No one writes a love scene like Ayden.

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my oh my!!! what a lovely chapter!!!

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Wow...intense...lovely...steamy. That seduction was executed perfectly by a master of the art. Thanks, Ayden. Thanks a lot!

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Oh my - please pass me the fan when you're finished - whew! Thank you!

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Chapter 10 is up, my dears. Enjoy!

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Woo-hoo! Thanks, Ayden & Renee, for giving your American readers fireworks on the 4th of July!!

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So George was her first? I was hoping he wasn't. Loved naked Charles in the bathroom! Loved the new chapters. Poor Elizabeth!!
She will probably believe everything he said about William.

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I really like this Jane, she's so cool and spunky! But Wickham is a pest here, i hope he's not doing more damage...look forward to the next chapter!

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Elizabeth has more self control than I do. I would have punched him from jump! Any more chapters? I am sorry that she got involved with him!

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