Here you go, chapter 11. Enjoy, despite the angst...!
I love how well written this chapter is. I hate what it portends. That was a painful but important interlude. Your Wickham is despicable. Thanks,Ayden!
Sigh..Lizzy lizzy, why didn't you calm down and listen to Darcy? Despicable Wickham, i hope that's the only damage he's doing. Look forward to the next update!
Yikes! Not as if we didn't expect it, though. Oh, well, here's hoping that Ayden doesn't keep us in angst-filled suspense for long!
This story is great, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
PLEASE don't keep us in suspense for to long!!
Chapter 12 is up, my dears. Enjoy!
Well, thank heavens (and Ayden) that the angst didn't last long.
Wow, Ayden, I love your romantic art to write.
Look forward to the next chapter... till then, just re-read the previous ones again and again...
Happy times are coming, i hope! And Jane is such a dear. Can't waif for Darcy and Lizzy's talk and more
Jane is much better for Charles than Charlotte was. It is nice to see both of them happy. Thank you for bringing William to see Elizabeth. I hope it leads to good things! I am so glad I don't remember exactly what happens. It's letting me enjoy the story even more to be surprised.
Chapter 13 is up, my dears. Enjoy!
Yay! A reunion with lots of lovin'!!
A sad separation.
I'm a little leary about William being gone for the next six weeks. And Lizzy unable to comunicate with him directly. Yikes!
Time for Lizzy to start locking her bedroom door! I wish William didn't have to be reached through messages. That never seems to work. I am glad they enjoyed their steamy reunion. It was
Like Jane, I am hoping that everything will be alright from now on...will wickham create havoc during Darcy's absence?? Can't wait for the next update!
Chapters 14 and 15 are up, my dears. Enjoy!
I forgot how heart-breaking this fabulous story can get! Wickham is bad and needs to be punished. Excellent chapters!!
Oh no!! This is getting quite messy, do we need Jane to be back to right things again?
Chapter 16 and 17 have just been posted, my dears. Enjoy!
Thanks for the new chapters! That was sad, sweet, painful. William & Elizabeth have a long way to go until they can be an actual couple. Thank you for portraying how difficult it is going to be.
So glad to see new chapters finally! :) Busybody Jane is not, she's a great help in this mess! Look forward to the gathering and I hope Lizzy and William will reconcile...but poor Fitz though...
Chapter 18 and 19 have been posted, my dears. Enjoy!
I like Richard very much and hope he finds happiness elsewhere. Thank you for the new chapters. They were poingnant and lovely. I look forward to seeing how L & D finally get together.
Poor Fitz! Got his hopes crashed..but am glad Darcy and Lizzy are back together. Is wickham going to get his just-desserts?? Look forward to more updates! :)
I really love your story. Can't wait for more.
I hope I'll make you happy then, Barbara, with chapter 20 and 21 one. Enjoy!
Love, love, love this story!!!
When can we expect more?
I can't wait for the revenge by by Darcy & Jane. Wickham is really begging for it. These two chapters were delightful & sensual treats!
God I love this story!! more please and soon! please say you will continue soon!!
Love this story!! Looking forward to more!!
Please update soon!!
Chapter 22 and 23 are up, my dears. Enjoy!
Wow, that was something!!!
I almost got a shock when I read the announcement about the new chapters. I had forgotten about it all... I had to read some former chapters to know what had happened before...
But now I am glad it continues and I look forward to read furter...
22 & 23 were so wonderful....so comforting and so sensual, too. Nice! I wish so much for Elizabeth & William's happiness and yet I feel there might be more problems on the way. I am so glad I don't exactly remember what's next. It's fun to read it as if it was the first time. I loooooved their shower!
Chapters 24-28, plus the epilogue have just been posted on Ayden's pages, my dears. Enjoy!
Two Ebb and Flow vignettes will be posted soon! Stay tuned for these two lovely bonuses.
I cannot even begin to pick a favorite scene or favorite line to quote, Ayden. I guess Georgie's response to Wickham would be the highlight today's post but all of it was romantic, passionate, funny, and delightful. The details of the nature scenes was also very nice. Thank you for re-posting this story. I think I love it even more than I did originally and that is saying a lot!
I love this story! Darcy breaking down and cry brought tears to my eyes... honestly. Fortunately it were happy tears
Thanks ever so much Ayden! This romantic feel-good story made my day
Love love this story, and such a beautiful ending! Thanks so much Ayden, for this wonderful story
Posted by Gayle:
I ha et you know what a wonderful story E@F is - I couldn't stop reading once I started - thankyou !!!!!
I absolutely loved this. I posted a review on my Pride and Prejudice blog: http://thebennetsisters.wordpress.com/2010/06/01/fanfiction-review-ebb-and-flow-by-ayden/
Thank you so much! My first fanfic glimpse and I adored it.
What a lovely, warm story!