Well Darcy just had to have that last bit of confirmation on the additional birthmark.
So our little Lizzy isn't that modiste after all. I thought maybe him being there would be another reason that she would continue to be mad at him. I never dreamt they'd make out in the stream. wow!
Must we wait two weeks to see if anyone sneeks into anyones room any time soon.
I also can't help wondering if Caroline will show up with open invite he gave her through his Aunt Catherine?
Ellen you write beautifully and I can't wait for more
Geri
"...their time together at Pemberley...there would be little of it." No, no, no! I want them to have lots of time. Lydia is going to ruin it, isn't she? This chapter was so sensual & lovely. Of course, I want much more!
Now, I agree with everybody else's wishes, but I have one of my own too. Call me insane, but I am looking forward to the moment when Caroline arrives. I love it so much when she makes a fool of herself over Darcy! And her ego is so inflated in this story, the scene will be memorable.
But of course, I have nothing against more Darcy and Elizabeth hot encounters (I may be insane, but I'm not foolish!)
A wonderful chapter. So fantastic that I don't even mind sharing my name with the horse!!
A great variation on the Pemberley meeting; full of promise for the future.
Thanks
JulietR
Hi - am just checking to see if Chapter 18 had been posted yet. I hope Lizzy and Darcy are able to spend at least 1 night at Pemberley before she and Jane have to return home.
Cheers,
Julia B --> Anxiously looking forward to more of this wonderful story!
Thanks for keeping me on my toes, ladies! I'm deep into the next chapter but I'm afraid it's nowhere near ready yet. Apologies for keeping y'all waiting. I guess I spoiled you by posting almost weekly with my last one.
No worries dearie...I guess we all just have to revisit the previous chapters ..but that doesn't mean we wouldn't want you to post soonn ..(ohhhh...greeedy me.. )
Now I am feeling guilty for putting pressure on you...it is just...you know how we are all out ere...since you are thisclose..I can stop banging my head..and my heart is beating normally again...thanks Ellen for putting up with me...I just luvvvvvvv your cowboy..oops cow"MAN"..I did'nt think I can call Darcy a boy!!
Ima
I can't speak for anyone else, but I believe there have been no new postings just because no one's ready yet. I hope to have my chapter ready by week's end...but don't hold me to it.
Ellen let see what happen last? I know what was involved. No wet shirt for Darcy though. hmmmm Was Lizzy at Pemberley? I can't seem to remember it has been so long.
Please hurry and post again I'm off to reread a few chapters
I really need my cowboy Darcy fix. I'm all jittery and hallucinating without it. I keep seeing something really bad happening before these two really get a chance (now, why would I think that?). Please post and put me out of my misery.
Just putting in a little more encouragement:) Actually it sounds as though you don't need that so much as a few extra hours in the day. Don't we all! I hope to read a new chapter of your rugged Darcy soon!
OMG, I'm so frustrated that I haven't finished this chapter! Yes, soon, very soon. The storyline is all there, just some of the details need to be added. I just need a few minutes to myself.
Lydia! Lydia Lydia ..I know Iknow we are reading P&P ere...but but stillllll ..they are doing so fine especially after Lizzy's uncertainties being solved..and all the passion shown before...and Mr Parker... grrrrrrrrrr..are you sure that he is being efficient..or is he a servant of Lady Cat or worst still Caroline's spy.. he he he...but whatever you decide Ellen...it is simply marvelous....I simply couldnt believe that you've posted...it is my dream that came through....thanks
So happy to see another posting of this wonderful story. Thanks for having Darcy be so passionate and patient with Lizzy. I'm so glad he was able to reassure her of his love before she did something rash. And now to rescue stupid Lydia from the brothel!
I love that innocent question from Jane--and Lizzy's doubts later. It seems quite credible that after the heat of the moment, she might start to wonder, what have I done.
This chapter made me smile a lot--until humour interruptus with the telegram about Lydia. I guess we're headed into a rough ride for a bit now. As always, I am looking forward to all of it--uh, you know what I mean.
GEEZ!!! This is the point in the story that always makes me want to pull my (Lydia's) hair. Thank goodness William knows Wickham's habits and the times are a little different during this era so we know that Lydia won't be forced to marry the very cad set out to destroy her.
I had to laugh at Elizabeth's imagination running away with her in the earlier part of the chapter, though. Poor William was just sitting there content to have his girl in his home and she's imagining he no longer loves her and just wants to get into her work pants. LOL Thank goodness they seem to finally have reached the point where they communicate with one another in a completely honest way. That will be a much better footing for their relationship. Now, will Elizabeth go with William or will she return home to calm the almost certain hysteria in the Bennet household? What will Jane do?
Thanks for all your hard work in bringing us such a good story, Ellen.