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Re: Ellen G's Silver Dust

OMG, OMG, OMG!!!!!!!! Thanks, Ima! Consider me inspired. (Too bad my whole family has a snow day today and I've got no time or privacy to write!)

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LOL....Mrs D...please dont faint..we need YOU alive & kicking..and Ellen..I am sure you can refer to this another day....

Ima

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OH MY! Lizzy and Will sure are a passionate couple. That stern voice at the end of the chapter can only be one character; what in tarnation does Aunt Catherine want now?!

Has anyone heard from Ellen? Its been over a month since the last chapter was posted, and her last message in this thread was on March 2nd. I hope everything is okay. (psst.. to be honest, I'm secretly hoping that there haven't been any more distractions, vacations, snow days, etc to keep her from writing more of this wonderful story ).

And Ima - Thank you very much for that link. Yum!


Cheers,
Julia B

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Hi, Julia! Thanks so much for your concern. Chapter 24 is complete and just needs some edits. All things being equal, I should be able to get it to Mrs Darcy tomorrow (Monday).

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Excellent news, Ellen! Glad to know you are doing okay and haven't abandoned this story.

Cheers,
Julia B

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Chapter 24 has just been posted, my dears. Enjoy!

"Don't you 'howdy' me, young man!" Mrs. de Bourgh exclaimed. "You know I find that expression insufferably vulgar."




Enjoy their conversation, such a cool twist with Lady De Bourgh's visit to Longbourn.

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That had better be Richard tackling William!!!

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I loved, loved, loved this chapter, Ellen! Especially Darcy saying he wouldn't marry Elizabeth next month. *snort*

Caroline's reaction was priceless, too. Now I look forward to seeing who is the new intruder.

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Kathy, that's Will tackling a man, not the other way 'round.

Who could it be??

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I just LOVE this story, Ellen! It is so light and witty and sexy in a fun way. I thought your device of having Darcy start off the response to Lady C was very clever and original. I'm not sure who he is tackling at the end, since that doesn't follow canon, so please bring on the next chapter and end the suspense!

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Oh,please let it be Richard and not that dastardly Wickham!

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I have been enjoying this story immensely and enjoy all your work. Aunt Catherine does not seem to get it, and but for the moment at least, it seems you have sent her hurtling over the cliff. So, who has come knocking this time?

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Ellen - I once again got caught up with your tale and you never disappoint. So entertaining and well written.

Now, who did Darcy tackle? Please don't make us wait to long to find out that answer.

Thanks for a terrific story.

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I suppose the silver lining here is that its a good thing Aunt Catherine showed up afterall! So Lizzy & Will will now get married in a week, instead of a whole month! I only hope we won't have to wait much more than a week to read all about it.

Thanks Ellen .

Cheers,
Julia B

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It could be Denny he's tackling, or his cousin Richard. As long as Wickham's still locked up for what he tried to do to Elizabeth, Darcy can tackle anyone he wants. :)

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I loved how Darcy stuck it to Catherine and Carolyn it couldn't get any better.

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Ellen any chance for a new chapter?
Geri

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Geri, not to worry... I'm about 75% done with the next chapter. I had hoped to finish it this week, but real life intervened. Soon, my dear!

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EllenG
Geri, not to worry... I'm about 75% done with the next chapter. I had hoped to finish it this week, but real life intervened. Soon, my dear!


I hope RL ease up some for you soon. For I'd dearly love a new chapter

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I am heartily ashamed of myself...making promises I couldn't keep. Sorry! But now that I'm back from our whirlwind college tour (Part Deux), I hope to get back to the business of writing this week. Thanks for keeping me on my toes!

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EllenG on April 19th
I am heartily ashamed of myself...making promises I couldn't keep. Sorry! But now that I'm back from our whirlwind college tour (Part Deux), I hope to get back to the business of writing this week. Thanks for keeping me on my toes!

Hi Ellen,
How's the writing coming along? Since the last chapter was posted on March 17th , and L&D were supposed to be getting married in a week.. hmm, let's see.. by my calculations, these newlyweds should be coming up for air by now.

Can you please give us an indication of how many chapters are left to your wonderful story? I know it will be a letdown and I'll be sad when L&D ride off to Pemberley into the sunset. Thanks!

Cheers,
Julia B - Looking forward to the rest of the story!

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Ellen, we miss you! I know those college tours are fun but tiring.
Hope to see more soon.

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Actually, Julia B, I'm on the last chapter! Sad, I know. And the reason it's taking so long is that I'm writing the wedding night scene. There. That should keep the fans interested while I'm trying to get it finished! Seriously, though, as I told Mrs. Darcy yesterday, I've had more work in RL than I've had in months, and something keeps getting in the way. But I'm so close to completing it, it shouldn't be long now. Thanks for your patience, everyone!

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May be this helpstom's tammy

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Oooooh! wedding night scene!

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Wicked Malena! I know in which direction your mind trends...

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Or perhaps this is more like it to inspire a cowgirl...

Darcy cowboy

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I must confess, Renee, that I find Malena's latest offering more apropos for Silver Dust.

Besides, if you really wanted to inspire me, you'd give me a little Hugh Jackman.

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I agree...Cant find a new photo of dear HJ as hot cowboy. But I need to erase Renne's crinkly Cowboy from my memory and replace it with something yummy. Maybe this one may help? Will do my best to find HJ. Promise.
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Indeed, Ellen, an eighteenth century duke has little to do with a nineteenth century cowboy. Sorry, for that offensive picture, I've deleted it.

But I need to erase Renne's crinkly Cowboy from my memory


I don't mind keeping him to myself. Compared to him I'm much more "crinklier" myself, so, for me he's gorgeous and the "fiennest" actor ever.

Malena, your picture doesn't show.

R~ <- off to search for Hugh pictures

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As requested: Hugh Jackman
Go to this website:
http://www.superherofan.net/galleries/albums/superherofan-gallery/Celebrities/H/Hugh-Jackman/

I tried to copy the picture and paste here but couldn't. I've really enjoyed your story and look forward to your next post.

Hope this helps!

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OMG, Tsluder, thank you for this treat!

The magnificent Hugh Jacman

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Whaa! Did it just get a helluva lot hotter in here or what!


Cheers,
Julia B

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Now THAT is an inspiration!!!!
Thanks, ladies!

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Babe, that definitely lights my SmileyCentral.com
Hope it finally lights Ellen's muse ...

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Malena, I love your smiley!

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According to the NY Times, the substantial opening weekend of "Wolverine" was attributed in part to "an unexpectedly large female audience." Unexpected? With Hugh Jackman buff and shirtless? Ha!

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Chapter 25 has just been posted on Ellen G's pages. Enjoy! And... don't be sad that it's the last chapter, an epilogue is yet to come!

Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeehaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

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Congratulations Ellen, it was great! Loved the grooms first wedding gift and Denny's redemption! Can't wait for the epilogue!

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Oh Ellen, it's over but not before the epi. Beautiful wedding night and Denny's forgiveness.

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Ahhh, Wet Darcys...*sigh*SmileyCentral.com They always make my day!!
Thank you Ellen for this lovely western. Looking forward to the epilogue. I am sure you must have something secreted up your pen with which to surprise and delight us even more.SmileyCentral.com
Thank you again.

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Ellen,

That was fabulous!

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Gotta' love those cowboys!

-Ruth

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Oh, how I loved this final chapter, but it helps to know that it is not quite over--still an epilogue!

After the way Elizabeth rejected Darcy earlier in the story, and indeed, the way he fought his feelings for her, their wedding night was a welcome relief--for us readers as well as them, LOL. He was everything I--I mean, Elizabeth--could have wished. He planned her pleasure perfectly, taking his time, taking care--right up to the moment when her coming brings him along. Lovely HMS, and the kind that makes an impression that stays long after one has stopped reading!

Also, nice to see everything and everyone else fall into place, including real redemption for Denny that actually helped secure the wedding. I am eager to know what happens to minor players like Lydia, Caroline, even Aunt Catherine (I would love to see Will get her money because who else does she have to leave it to? It's not the money but the principle. I would like to see her punished or brought down in some way for the way she treated the couple, particularly Elizabeth).

And, while I assume that Elizabeth and Darcy live happily ever after, I want details!!

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Ellen,

I've been absolutely enthralled by Silver Dust. Thank you for a wonderful story.

Roselle

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Thank you, Ellen. Silver Dust is a wonderful story. Do you think you'll end up getting it published?

I'm both happy because it was an entertaining and satisfying chapter *AND* at the same time I'm also melancholy because the story has ended.

You wrapped up the loose ends; glad Denny saw the error in his ways, Caroline will stalk.. ur, I mean take an interest in someone else (and maybe end up happy), and that L&D *FINALLY* are together.

Looking forward to the Epilogue.

Thanks again.

Cheers,
Julia B

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Ellen thank you for the new chapter. You certainly shocked me bring Denny back. I don't know how Darcy can trust him let alone Mr B being buddy buddy with him.

I also hate that Lizzy was treated like a field hand while the other sisters do nothing.

I loved Darcy unarming her totally appropriate considering how you started this fun tale. I hate that there is only one chapter left but I can't wait to read it.

Ellen I hope you will soon grace us with a new story I've loved your writing style.
Geri

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This a story that I know I will read again & again. Te last chapter was so yummy and the bath itself was perfection! Joe Denny will be a loyal employee from now on I think. I hope Wickham gets some punishment for his treatment of the Bennet girls. I am sorry the story is finished and I can't wait to see the epilogue!

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A great ending to a terrific story.
It's been a wonderful ride from start to finish!
Thanks
JulietR

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So happy to see the couple finally married, they both deserve such happiness, especially Lizzy! Look forward to your epilogue, Ellen!

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Dear Ellen,

It’s taken me a while to find the time to write a proper response to your last chapter. Because, oh, what a chapter it was! Packed with all the good things a fangirl like me appreciates. Other readers have remarked on Denny’s redemption, Caroline’s predatory instincts and the smart detail of the Remington derringer and the story coming finally to a full circle, so I’ll skip those, though I enjoyed those episodes as much as everyone else. However, these are a few of the extracts I particularly like:

Oh, yeah, I know all 'bout what happened at the Lone Wolf with you and Miss Elizabeth, the whole town does. Sheriff musta thought it was mighty funny, 'cause it looks like he's the one what spread it around, but you can imagine that Wickham wasn't happy 'bout everyone knowin' how he got his ass whupped by some girl.

Now, it must be my “instinct of perversity”, but I confess I enjoyed the fact that everyone in Reno knew what had happened and the sense of humiliation it must bring about for Wickham. I know it’s twisted, but I can’t help it.

I also loved Georgiana’s reaction:
Had it not been inappropriate, she would have whooped with joy and turned cartwheels across the room.
I could picture her beaming young face as I read this paragraph.

But my favourite has to be the last paragraph:
Then, assured that the rest of their belongings, as well as beloved King, would follow by carriage with Georgiana and Mrs. Reynolds, Elizabeth and Will rode off - not, alas, into the sunset - but into the dawn of a new life together.


It is not the first time I say this, and it will not be the last, but, Ellen G., you are a gifted writer. Your descriptions are so vivid and powerful, your characters so real... I’m not very good at words, so I can only summarize it with the following:

Please please please do not stop writing.

P.S. Looking forward to the epilogue!

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