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I do not think Bingleylizzy will be much comfortable when Elizabeth's suitors are at large and in rut around Longbourn...
Besides, those stays must be killing him..More on Bingley for chapter 11.what stay? lol, he'll get use to them
surely you're not going to impose more unwanted suitors on bingley/lizzy? another time, perhaps
and I look forward to read about bingley in the next chapter, although, I'm mighty curious to what you have install for lizzy/bingley in london, where will he stay and loads more tibits (how will lizzy/bingley act before georgiana), but i'll leave that to you
Chapter 11 is up, my dears. Enjoy! 
Must acknowledge a typo. Not my dear beta´s fault. It was an addition I made at the last moment. Vowed read bowed.
My apologies
Male
Male, I love this story!
This was perhaps the funniest chapter yet. I was howling so loudly with laughter that several people looked in on me. So funny. . .
And, now Bingley and Darcy, alone again. Oh, so many possibilities--as always, I can hardly wait.
I see what you mean about the suitors, though I would never counted Mr Collin or Wickham, but off course they are suitors - detestable ones. Perhaps Bingley could do something about Wickham (a kick down there would be nice)
I really enjoy reading both of your stories, even if I'm lazy with commenting at times.
I wonder how things are going to unfolds and what 'lessons' would Elizabeth & Bingley learn before the transformation undo itself.
is Bingley going to enjoy herself socializing in London, dancing alway with ladies at balls, enjoying the theater, a game of foils or boxing 
wiling Elizabeth visit Lady Catherine and Hunsford parsonage?
I'm sure everyone will think it funny, but please do not have Darcy kiss Elizabeth you know what I mean, that dream things was quite gross
Hi Malena,
I truly love this bodyswap story!!!
I hope you post again real soon!
Bien 
Hugs.
Chapter 12 will probably be posted by Wednesday, if my betas returned it by then. Thank you all for all the enquires both after the chapter and my health.I have received many emails.
stay tuned.
This story continues to be great--laugh out loud funny, but more than that. It's a well-thought out story with the characters behaving so in-character, given these totally out-of-character situations.
Excellent use of canon dialogue--you made it fit perfectly. I am enjoying this immensely.
Thank you dear readers, for your kind words. I am thrilled with the general acceptance of the story.
Predictions are all very good. Lacy in particular has helped with her clever input.
Will Bingley in the flesh of Elizabeth be seduced by Mr Darcy? Will Jane marry her own sister?
For now, let us see how an addition to this merry pair may change the course of the affairs dramatically
But there is no need to pine for more.Mrs Darcy will soon post a new chapter for your enjoyment.
Rush over to dear Malena's pages, my dears. Two magnificent chapters are awaiting you!
I have to say Malena, that these two chapters were some what comical:
Poor E having to indure the fun brawl between the cousins. Makes them seem human, but of course she wouldn't know that.
And to wake up incased in Darcy's embrace - oh what I wouldn't give.
At least she still Bingley. The only thing I could think of that would be more mortifying to her would be if she were to wake up as Elizabeth again.
Loves the chapters
teb
Elizabeth and Darcy and the good Colonel, about to crawl into bed together.
Tres kinky, ooh la la.
All the more so since they're all men, but I get that it's a cold night, only one room and only one bed in that room.
At least, this happens after Elizabeth learns from Darcy's own lips his total besotted fascination with her--never has the body switch been of greater value to true love.
But she is still in Bingley's body and I don't think she can do much with Darcy--or, for that matter, the colonel--while she's stuck. Delicious torment.
More please!
Poor E having to indure the fun brawl between the cousins. Makes them seem human, but of course she wouldn't know that.
And to wake up incased in Darcy's embrace - oh what I wouldn't give.
At least she still Bingley. The only thing I could think of that would be more mortifying to her would be if she were to wake up as Elizabeth again.
teb
Yes, but if she woke up as Elizabeth, wouldn't she go back into her real body, therefore not waking up sandwiched between the Colonel and Darcy?
Sorry, I lost my train of thought for a moment--something about the image of being sandwiched between the Colonel and Darcy is profoundly distracting. . .
Poor Elizabeth. She really cannot enjoy what is a rare opportunity. I wonder if her spirtual essence, housed in Bingley's hairy and muscular body, drew Darcy to embrace her in the night? It seems the Colonel is a rough sleeper, his legs entangling "Bingley" as he tosses and turns, no doubt. But what of Darcy? And how does Elizabeth feel about this? Will Darcy awaken with amorous impulses toward "Bingley" that will send the poor man off that much more quickly to rescue "Elizabeth," as "she" requested when Darcy visited Longbourn? It seems that Darcy is becoming less confused about what he needs to do with regards to Elizabeth.
But will he ever be able to figure out where she is, really, in the body that looks physically like her or in the one that calls to his soul?
haha im lovin this story more and more...
i really hope you'd finish this soon, i just cant bear waiting for new chapters...
thanks malena!
Thank you both Apples and Reske,
The next chapter is being polished and will be sent for betaing over the week end. But my poor beta does have a real life, unlike me, you know, and we will have to wait patiently for her to have a go at it before she sits in front of the computer to correct my lousy grammar.
Am so glad you have, my dear. It really delights me to know how much people enjoy the story. It is meant to distract us a little from the hardships of real life.
Chapter 16 has just been posted, my dears. Enjoy!
R~ <- still wiping tears of laughter from her eyes
Oh, this chapter was too, too funny. Poor Elizabeth. Now I really can't wait for the next chapter. And did Bingley get caught in bed with Jane???
teb
Dear all...am delighted I got you by surprise.This is indeed getting more and more into me. I have a hundred and thousand ideas so you had better hold on to your bonnets.
Hangnhu...You call me evil? The story is called A Naughty Star...what else can you expect?
Lacy..I love all your introspection! I wish I could have more time to write all the ideas that come to my mind.
Thanks for taking the time to comment. It is a caress to my soul!
Your questions will be answered soon, ladies. Chapter 17 and 18 are already written. They just need polishing...
Hanghnu,
Promise you will soon see the light.
Kim, thanks for your comment. Am glad you're enjoying it!
