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Elizabeth and Darcy and the good Colonel, about to crawl into bed together.
Tres kinky, ooh la la.
All the more so since they're all men, but I get that it's a cold night, only one room and only one bed in that room.
At least, this happens after Elizabeth learns from Darcy's own lips his total besotted fascination with her--never has the body switch been of greater value to true love.
But she is still in Bingley's body and I don't think she can do much with Darcy--or, for that matter, the colonel--while she's stuck. Delicious torment.
More please!
Poor E having to indure the fun brawl between the cousins. Makes them seem human, but of course she wouldn't know that.
And to wake up incased in Darcy's embrace - oh what I wouldn't give.
At least she still Bingley. The only thing I could think of that would be more mortifying to her would be if she were to wake up as Elizabeth again.
teb
Yes, but if she woke up as Elizabeth, wouldn't she go back into her real body, therefore not waking up sandwiched between the Colonel and Darcy?
Sorry, I lost my train of thought for a moment--something about the image of being sandwiched between the Colonel and Darcy is profoundly distracting. . .
Poor Elizabeth. She really cannot enjoy what is a rare opportunity. I wonder if her spirtual essence, housed in Bingley's hairy and muscular body, drew Darcy to embrace her in the night? It seems the Colonel is a rough sleeper, his legs entangling "Bingley" as he tosses and turns, no doubt. But what of Darcy? And how does Elizabeth feel about this? Will Darcy awaken with amorous impulses toward "Bingley" that will send the poor man off that much more quickly to rescue "Elizabeth," as "she" requested when Darcy visited Longbourn? It seems that Darcy is becoming less confused about what he needs to do with regards to Elizabeth.
But will he ever be able to figure out where she is, really, in the body that looks physically like her or in the one that calls to his soul?
haha im lovin this story more and more...
i really hope you'd finish this soon, i just cant bear waiting for new chapters...
thanks malena!
Thank you both Apples and Reske,
The next chapter is being polished and will be sent for betaing over the week end. But my poor beta does have a real life, unlike me, you know, and we will have to wait patiently for her to have a go at it before she sits in front of the computer to correct my lousy grammar.
Am so glad you have, my dear. It really delights me to know how much people enjoy the story. It is meant to distract us a little from the hardships of real life.
Chapter 16 has just been posted, my dears. Enjoy!
R~ <- still wiping tears of laughter from her eyes
Oh, this chapter was too, too funny. Poor Elizabeth. Now I really can't wait for the next chapter. And did Bingley get caught in bed with Jane???
teb
Dear all...am delighted I got you by surprise.This is indeed getting more and more into me. I have a hundred and thousand ideas so you had better hold on to your bonnets.
Hangnhu...You call me evil? The story is called A Naughty Star...what else can you expect?
Lacy..I love all your introspection! I wish I could have more time to write all the ideas that come to my mind.
Thanks for taking the time to comment. It is a caress to my soul!
Your questions will be answered soon, ladies. Chapter 17 and 18 are already written. They just need polishing...
Hanghnu,
Promise you will soon see the light.
Kim, thanks for your comment. Am glad you're enjoying it!
i most certainly did not expect this...
haha, i cannot wait for more of the story, as well as the scene in longbourn if bingley is caught on the same bed with jane
jumping with excitement...thanks malena!
Chapter 17 is up, my dears. It seems impossible, but the story gets funnier still!
The latest chapter reminds me yet again that you have a premise that is gold and you are mining it for all its mighty worth.
This was so deliciously funny--I rushed through it once and then went back to slowly savor the situations: Elizabeth realizes she does love Darcy, and in that instant, she is in her body and in his arms! But that cannot be--how would a virgin explain that--so, magically, she leaves her body again, and there before an amazed Colonel Fitzwilliam stands Bingley--who was a girl a minute ago.
Now that the colonel has seen, despite all the persuading Darcy tries to do, will his belief that Bingley had been for a brief moment, a girl, become a part of the plot going forward? Even if it lead to nothing more, it was a great scene. Oh, and your description of poor Bingley's predicament--including his up-close-and-personal moment with the woman who he wishes could be his mother-in-law. It was not the moment he wanted
This story is wonderful!
Here you go, my dears, chapter 18 has just been posted!
Thank you, Izabella. I hope I could write more often!
Chapter 21 is up, my dears. Enjoy!
teasing, teasing Malena, and poor Lizzy...
I can't wait for the next chapter (maybe a meeting between E and D?)
that chapter 21 was absolutely not enough Malena
but I'm glad the Jane will not be marrying Mr Collins and for Elizabeth quick thinking. I wonder if she suspect that poor Charles has been imprisoned, or is she only thinking of how to get back to her Darcy? This is the last swap, right, Malena?
Thank you, thank you Geri for that insight
Darcy rejection is better than plain blindness, it would also explain why he spend so much time with Charles, teaching him fencing, boxing
Chapter 22 is up, my dears. Enjoy!
