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Re: Jan H - The Child

Lili Ch
But why is Elizabeth taking all the responsibility towards Fan? I think it's guilt. But even Mr. Bennet refers all decisions regarding the child's welfare to Elizabeth as if she (E) was the mother. Strange behaviour.. Poor Fan! It's as if she is a burden to everyone except E. What about Mr. & Mrs. B's reponsibility? All, including Jane, just want to wash their hands of the problem. Probably Fan can sense E is the only one who does not reject her. It's so sad...And E has no choice but to marry Darcy; but I feel it's unfair for her to ask him to adopt Fan and give her the Darcy name.


Well Lili, if you stop and think about it, Mr. Bennet never did put forth any effort with his children, and Mrs. Bennet doesn't have the sense to even begin to do anything...that's why Lydia was allowed to grow up as she did and then go off to Brighton with no idea of right and wrong.

I have to agree with you about Fan...children can sense when they are not wanted or when there is a problem...Elizabeth is probably the only one who doesn't 'blame' the child!

I'm hoping she says yes, too! But I can see her point...she doesn't want to stop him from being able to obtain his love...not knowing she is that love!

I'm still after Darcy's shovel to smack them both on the head and wake them up! Wickham is desparate and dangerous...that's for sure!

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Comment originally posted by Christine:

"Oh happy day! I have been trying to get in to read this for a couple of days now-- and for whatever reason, everything kept freezing up. Thank heavens! Can you imagine my how crazy with anxiety I have been knowing there was a new JanH story and I had yet to read it?!

By the way JanH-- were you aware of the writing contest that LaurelAnn at AustenProse is sponsoring? The winner will be published in an anthology w/authors like Syrie James, Stephanie Barron, Amanda Grange, etc -- by ballantine Books. Here is the info-- I thought of you when I saw this new story-- now that I know you are writing again, maybe you can write something for the Feb13 deadline! http://www.pemberley.com/JAMMDI/JAMMDI.html

So happy you are writing again. Happy day indeed!"

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OMG!!!!! DARCY, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE??

Does he realize the chaos he just started by finding Wickham and telling him about the child? Guess not!OMG!!! I cannot believe he had the gall to do that? Who died and made him 'God'? Ohh, that's right..he appointed himself 'God Almighty' who knows 'what is best for everyone'.

I was going to point out some of the lines that struck me the most but Sandy did better than I would do, sooo I'll just DITTO to everything she said.

What was I thinking?

I'm sure Darcy will be repeating that over and over. He really need some serious banging on the head!! The consequences of his actions will be devastating for the Bennet Family. What makes him think the child is burden to the Bennets? What would have happened if somebody tried to take Georgiana away from him if they perceived she was a burden to him?

Arrogant.. Presumptious.. Stupid.. Obtuse... Blind.. Irresponsible.. Interference... This is what comes to my mind when I think of Darcy. How will he ever redeem himself after what he has done? Whatever comes his way, he will surely deserve it! I think he just placed the final nail in his coffin...

He had destroyed my greatest hopes for happiness.

Nooo, Darcy himself is solely responsible for destroying whatever happiness he could have had...

Jan, such a 'I don't know exactly what to call' Darcy you have created here. He frustates me to no end. I cannot wait to see how you get him out of this mess! Excellent as always .

BTW, Bingley 1, Darcy -2!

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What! You mean to say you think this Darcy is wrong? You know the old saying about how the mighty are fallen - well, my Darcy is digging himself a deep pit.

Thank you Renee, Malena, Sandy!, Vesna, Irene, Christine, and Lili, for all your comments. Sandy, I got your message loud and clear - LOL. And Christine, thank you for telling me about the contest at AustenProse. I doubt that I've got time to write anything by the deadline, but I'll take a look at it.

Hang in there with me. This is going to be a rough ride.

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That was so much fun! I just know that Elizabeth is going to be soooooangry at Darcy for his presumption. I cannot wait to see her lay into him!

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OMG! I cant believe a new story...FINALLY!!! And it is greatness so far! Cant wait for more. You have made my day!!!

btw, I cant remember but if I am correct, dont you usually write in Elizabeth's POV?! Love how it's in Darcy's this time!!!

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Thank you Jan for this new story!!!!
I love all your stories and this one, in Mr Darcy POV seems to begin very well!!
Oh I can't wait another week for the next chapter!
Thanks again for brighten up my week!!

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Hmm...I'm not sure if Darcy's decision to help in the Wickham's situation will be any good, as I am quite sure that the Bennets are very attached to the child. But at least he asking the ladies for a dance at the ball is helping :)

Thankfully Bingley hasn't bail out yet! But we'll have to wait and see of course ;)

Thanks for the update

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I believe Darcy is acting according to his time. You can see that his plans regarding the child are very similar to what Austen describes in Emma with Emma's friend. She is being raised at a school but believed to be the daughter of a rich man and his mistress. I see no wrong in that.

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You could always take a chapter or two of something you have previously posted and condense it (like a teaser)to fit the perameters. Do say you will try to enter!!!!!! What a great way to bring attention to your body of work!

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Wow Jan, it sounds like Darcy has a long way to go here.
He takes it into his own hands that he's the one that needs to decide after 2 years what to do about Lydia and Wickham's babe???

Yeah, I say there's a lot more angst to come. First of all why would he even think any of the Bennets would want to see Wickham ever again, and second why would he want to even include Wickham in their life. Sounds like his 'pride' is not quite in check.

I wonder what Georgiana would have to say about what he's doing. Would she question him on if she was the one to have the babe if he would be so readily to have it gone, to give it up?

Well, I will await patiently to find out your answers.
Very much enjoying the story!

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Thank you for your comments, Lucy, Mixon, Gio, Malena, and Teb! And hi, KayakChick! Glad to see you again. I do understand the distress Darcy is causing some of you, and Malena, I appreciate your saying that Darcy is "acting according to his time." I agree with that statement. We love him, though, and want him to be a better man. Keep your fingers crossed.

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Well, I got interrupted and forgot to finish my message. Christina, thank you for your continuous encouragement! I looked at the guidelines for entries at AustenProse's contest, and since the deadline is very, very soon, I just simply don't have time to put something together for it. I write slowly, and short stories require a lot of attention. But I appreciate your thinking of me. Maybe next time.

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Well, Jan...you have certainly come up with one perfectly saucy twist. Simply beautiful. I wonder what he will do. Million thanks for the update.
Male and happy Valentine

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OMG Jan! I can't believe you have come up with such a despicable Darcy!

"You must make a second attempt," I said. "Convince the family that you care for the child- that you wish to do right by her, that you demand your privileges as her father."

"Did you even ask to see her?"
"Who?"
"Your daughter!"
"Why should I? If the chit is not to bring me riches, of what use is she?"
And this is a man he would want to take a small child? Someone who must put on an act to act to convince the family he wishes to do right by her? Wickham already calls the child a brat and he doesn’t even know her yet! Who died and made Darcy God! Well...obviously disguise is not abhorrent to this Darcy.

"He has come for the child. Jane said he desires to raise her on his own. I find that extremely hard to believe, do you not?"
Even Bingley knows this is not right...and he doesn't have a thought unless you put it into his head, Darcy!

There, hidden from the view of most, she leaned her head against the underside of the stone bridge as though her spirit had been trampled.
Yes...and guess who is the one who trampled it! Moron!

And basically he’s telling Lizzy that 'he' (Darcy) was the one who orchestrated Bingley coming back to Hertfordshire...that Bingley wouldn’t have done it on his own. That makes Bingley look like an even bigger cad than before.

Unfortunately, he cannot ask for your sister's hand because of...well, because of the child. He must think of his own unmarried sister and restrain his desires for her benefit.
This is the same sister who thought nothing of outright lies to get what she wanted...and he’s supposed to think of her? Are all of these men morons? Darcy is trying to play on her sympathy? She must choose between Fan and Jane? If she doesn’t choose Jane then Darcy will tell Bingley not to marry Jane. No matter the period Darcy, I would term that emotional blackmail!

I staggered, suddenly fearing that I might possibly pitch headfirst into the river! "Marry? Wickham? No!" My voice erupted in a roar.
And I can only hope that band tightens enough to choke him to death. Then Wickham wouldn’t get any money and he would leave them in peace!

Lizzy is right, what is it to Darcy who she marries. Darcy admits he separated Jane and Bingley, he never told anyone about Wickham, he appoints himself judge and jury as to what should be done with Fan...all of this regardless of how anyone in her family may feel. If he were an uncle or even a cousin, I could see him wanting to involve himself but he is doing this purely to assuage his own guilt feelings.

Maybe if Bingley finds out what Darcy is trying to do to the Bennets, it will be the impetus to finally stand on his own two feet and make his own decisions.

I just have one question for Darcy...If you suffered an ailment for every wrong you committed against another how long would you live?...Choke on that!

So he has until tomorrow...it will be interesting to see how much worse he can screw this up.

Jan, you know I'm loving this story or I wouldn't be so emotional about this Darcy. He has himself backed into a corner with seemingly no way out...so now what? I can't wait to find out! Excellent writing! You always capture my emotions!

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Happy Valentine's Day my fellow P&P lovers!

What a great twist, Jan...having Wickham ask for Elizabeth's hand. Love it! Cant wait to read what Darcy's solution will be. But not so sure if this is fair, leaving us hanging like this on V-day, lol!

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Oh the metalling old fool. Darcy has managed to make it only worse. Come on Sunday. :D

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Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! You are such a wonderful writer, Jan. Again, cant wait for next week.

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Jan, I am sorry for not commenting before.
I am loving your story as I love your previous ones.
Thank you very much for sharing this with us.

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Thank you, Lucy, Irene, Astrid, Kimberly, Rori, Gio, Vesna, Sandy, Wendi, teb, Christina, Lili, and Kayakchick for all your comments! And welcome Romi and Gidget! It's so great to hear from new readers. Gidget, I'm crazy about your name because I loved that book.

So many questions - I think they'll all be answered in what lies ahead. As someone said, this is going to take a while to get sorted out, so hope you'll stay with me.

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I've been reading your story at DWG. I just love it, Jan. Darcy is trying desperately to help Elizabeth, but being the social ostrich that he is, he is going about it in the wrong way. Proposing is his first step in the right direction. Yes, she'll find out he found Wickham and was going to pay him to take the child, but love will conquer all. Unless you're going to be REALLY mean to us. ; )

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Robin Helm
...but love will conquer all.

Jan, please say Robin is right! I am so glad that he proposed even if it was not too tenderly done. Well, he did the best he could! I love not having Wickham in the child's life but will he attempt to get something out of the deal? I love this story, Jan. Of course I do. I love all your stories!

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I'm loving this story.

How could Darcy not at least give a better hint that he still loves Lizzy? I know he's unsure of himself, but geez... "had I flattered you..." (Hunsford proposal) at one point he seemed to understand that flattery can help a proposal along. Has he forgotten?

Please give us more!

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Thank you, Robin, Lucy, and Greatreader for your kind comments! I do hope love conquers all. I'm having some trouble with Elizabeth's attitude right now, and for good reason, but hopefully she'll fall for Darcy in spite of his failings.

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Chapter 7 is up, my dears. Enjoy!

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Jan, you know I love your writing and I am sooo excited about this new story. Thanks for quenching our thirst for more angst. What is wrong with us?

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Oh Jan...I've been waiting for this all day! And what a chapter! To say the opening sentence shocked me would be an understatement! And Darcy silencing Caroline is even more of a shock! Sorry Caro...you'll never mistress of Pemberley now so believe it!!

As for Wickham-two brawny stable hands from Netherfield and I routed him from the county with naught but empty threats on his part. I dismissed his remarks, for I knew him to be a coward, one who preyed on young women but far too fearful to face a man.
Believe that if it makes you feel good, Darcy! Wickham is desperate and now he is even more desperate...he thought you cheated him before but it's nothing to what he is feeling now! He is a very dangerous man and you just can't see it!


We planned to leave for London directly, taking the child with us.
Oh Dear! I notice he doesn't ever call her by name...she is only just 'the child'.


My conceited assurance
...did Darcy just say he had conceited assurance? Wonder of wonders!!! and then....
Silently, I told myself to be patient, knowing full well that I did not possess that particular virtue.
...did he also just say he had no patience?...My My! He certainly has faults to spare, doesn’t he?

I'm not surprised that Elizabeth was only interested in having in writing that Darcy would always provide for Fan. Why would he expect any different...wasn't that why she was marrying him...the reason he gave for her marrying him...not love or affection but for 'the child!'

How long will that child come between us?
Darcy's resentment just builds and builds...does he expect Elizabeth to go from despair to his bed just because he said he would take care of 'the child?'

Darcy loves to wallow in self-pity and anger...
Wickham for straddling me with his offspring and Elizabeth for failing to appreciate the honour I had done her.
So...you run away again to your club...tell your wife nothing...you drink too much and continue to blame everyone else! Have you learned nothing at all? Seems that all Darcy can think about is his favors to Elizabeth. I've got news for him, if this is all he feels, then he doesn't deserve her. Maybe he should have married the likes of Caroline Bingley...but he needs to understand that Elizabeth is not some unfeeling woman of the ton!

For all she knows, he married her to keep her from a fate worse than death at the hands of Wickham. No professed love or affection.

And what would he expect her to think? He can’t be so blind as to think she wouldn’t want to make sure Fan was well taken care of and settled. No matter who the child was...dense...dense Darcy! So he runs away again when things aren’t ordered to his exact specifications!

I sat ramrod straight as though a poker had been inserted into my backbone,
Actually, I was thinking of some other part of his anatomy! *snicker*

"Yes," I said slowly, "the storm appears to have passed."
"For now, at least."


At least until Darcy decides to allow his emotions to override his sense...again!

I actually see Elizabeth as being very confused, yet, women had few rights and could only refuse or accept dances and proposals. Her options are limited right now...Wickham or Darcy. Naturally, after what Wickham has done to the family she would choose Darcy. But she is in a world she doesn't know...she is fearful, confused and apprehensive. At least this is how I see her.

Maybe I can make a better decision on Elizabeth after some more interaction. It is good that once she had some concrete information, that he didn't have a mistress and would not, she decided that she could join him for dinner and not remain separate. I'm hoping that is a good sign.

Now...what is Wickham going to attempt next! And we haven't heard from Darcy's family yet, either! Oh Dear!

Being done in Darcy's POV, we know nothing of Elizabeth' thoughts and we have to rely on Darcy's interpretation of things to make a conclusion. And we know how good he is at reading people!!! LOL!

Love, Love, Love it Jan and can't wait for more!

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Also hoping the storm has passed - at least temporarily! These two really need some perspective (and conversational) exchange if they desire a "real" relationship and marriage. Love it Jan - looking forward to the next!!

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Just say yes and marry and then when Wickham tells what Darcy tried to arrange she will be stuck with him regardless.

Can't wait for Ch 7
Geri

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Okay so chapter 7 was already posted. So Elizabeth joined him I'm glad he didn't storm out the front door.

Heres to hoping the storm clouds stay away for a little any way. :D

Geri

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Darcy is so full of anger. If he doesn't accept Fan and treat her more lovingly, poor Lizzy will never be accepting of him.
I know in those days, children were supposed to be seen only rarely but Darcy needs to give in a little even if Fan does remind him of Wickham.

Irene
GRC

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Oh dear, Darcy with his pent up anger and frustration is not going to make things easy. But at least Elizabeth now knew that he has no mistress and is fully committed to her. So that's a good start when she joined him for dinner. Hope the peace will at least be for quite awhile so they can get to know each other better :)

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Today they both need frying pan. Talk, people, talk!
Storm passed? - it's beginning.

I enjoy this story very much, they are just so yours L and D. Thank you.

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vesna

Storm passed? - it's beginning.

We had a bad storm here a couple hours ago with tornado warnings and hail but even though the winds and rain were ferocious, we didn't get the tornados...at least close to us.

What made me chuckle is that just as I was reading your comment, the sky darkened and the thunder rolled again (it's still raining). So this gave me such an weird feeling! Yikes!!! It's coming around again!!

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I feel that it is going to be rough goings for a while. They are so cold to each other. I do hope they find some middle ground here.
About Fran, if she is with Elizabeth why is she crying all the time? I hope she gets handed to Darcy and her nerves are soothed quickly, that would be the beginning of some kid of bond or mayhap she is named after her her grandmother for a reason and she will continue to wail.
How awkward for everyone involved her. Did the banns get posted or was it to quiet of a wedding?
What about Darcy's family when will they decend upon the newly weds?
Elizabeth ended up in Darcy's room, that was a hoot! She subconciously wants him.

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Love the story so far. It's a FMS without the FM. What an interesting twist. And since I know how the story will end, I can endure the rough waters without jumping overboard!

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Ohh Jan, I feel torn. I have issues w/ Elizabeth's attitude. For some reason I feel like she is not even trying. Even thou Darcy started most of this mess, he did help E and her family to remove the "scandal" by marrying her. Jane will be able to marry Bingley, Fan will always be taken care of and the Bennets' respectability will return. She could at least be a little grateful. Besides it's not as if D is asking for his marital rights, he just wants to spend time w/ her.

The other thing that bothers me is that all the Bennets, including Jane, are being selfish. It was easier just to "dump" the child's responsibility to Elizabeth so they can go back to the way they were before Lydia eloped. And I'm extremely curious as to why does Elizabeth feel herself responsible for Fan? I do not understand that!

Now, was Elizabeth jealous? I wonder!

Those two really need to talk to each other, otherwise they will never be happy. E is jumping to conclusions and acting accordingly and D is being very angry and resentful. They've got a loooong way to go.

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It is hard not to feel disappointed for Darcy and accept he feels rather neglected, especially since the wedding night of his dreams is still just a dream. But I can sympathize w/Elizabeth a little, a very little... in regards to her needing to just need a little time to de-compress. Who wouldn't be suffering from tactile overload after being locked in a carriage w/a needy, cranky, young child, then having to soothe the child again once in the new home. Not quite the easy transition for this marriage -- w/someone she believes really doesn't love her anymore, etc etc etc. I am sure she is a bit overwhelmed and trying to figure out how she is going to fit into this household w/out losing her dignity. Great chapter JanH! BTW-- just saw that Arranged Marriage & The Journey are being published this year! O happy day!!!!!! Will def be ordering my copies!! Congrats!

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Hi, Cindy, Sandy, Terry, Geri, Irene, Gio, Vesna, Teb, Opehlia, Lili, Christina, and Fiona, and thank you for your entertaining comments!

I know you're frustrated with Darcy and Elizabeth right now. On another board, some are even critical of little Fan. I will say there's a bit of lightness ahead, beginning in Chapter Nine. Don't give up on me!

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Jan H
Don't give up on me!
Nevah!!!
Your stories are always so well written and I love them.

I did think of something, though. Darcy hates Wickham so much but what did Wickham really do to him?

Seems like what he has done to the Bennet family is far, far worse than anything he did to Darcy. Darcy's sister is married, he had Wickham out of his life for good. Wickham is only back because Darcy brought him back.

Now, poor little Fan has done nothing to him...yet he can't even call her by name. WAKE UP DARCY!!!!!

OK...I'm bringing out the

Looking forward to more!

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Please include me as one of the avid readers of this story. I'm eating it up with two spoons.

Chapter 7 has been my favorite so far. Yes! They're married and have to find a way to go forward together. I can feel Darcy's frustration, as I believe that Elizabeth is hiding behind the child a bit. Their spat at the end of the chapter did much to clear the air, adjust Elizabeth's misconceptions, but they have so far to go. And I want to be with them to the end, or their beginning.

Thanks!

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Jan trust me we will never give up your beautiful story, any of them.
Fan is a two-year old child who has an anchor in Elizabeth. I hope that one day, when he opens, she will find the same in Darcy.

Sandy, the storm you spoke about was on our TV, it looked awful.

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Jan! I absolutely love your stories! I like the way you write from the perpective of only Darcy (or Elizabeth in other stories). Please, don´t make us wait too long for an update.
Congratulations!

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Thank you, Sandy, Lucy, Vesna, and China! I appreciate your kind comments so much. China, I try to post every week, so look for a new chapter soon.

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Chapter 8 has just been posted, my dears. Enjoy!

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Good Grief Darcy! Get the stick out of your posterior and lighten up! I really get the feeling that Lizzy is trying to tease and bring a little liveliness to the evening and he is just so resentful of anything that doesn't have her in his bed even though he is doing nothing to move toward that end.

"I am not in the habit of being awakened by an unruly creature pulling at my hair."
Awareness of what must have occurred washed over her countenance. "And is it your general habit to sleep in the library, sir?"

RuhRoh...so...not only has his staff found out that his marriage is a sham...he also gives the impression that he can't stand to sleep in the room next to hers. And his yelling at an inquisitive and innocent child and calling her a creature certainly isn't going to win him any brownie points! Wonder how he would have felt if someone called his sister a creature at that age?

a growing resentment settled in my heart toward the child. If not for her, my wife's attentions might be gracious and warm, rather than mocking. If not for her, I might have awakened in my own bed with my wife lying in my arms. If not for her...
Oh yes, I began to resent Wickham's spawn. Unfortunately, as the weeks of my marriage passed, the deeper my resentment grew.
What he is too blind to see is that it is that resentment that is the whole problem. Because of it he can't even begin to think of them as a family which means there is no warmth or friendly interactions. Lizzy is largely ignored or at least she isn't given the respect that she should have. Why should she think that he wants anything more than a marriage of convenience.

Tell me, sir, exactly what is her place? The day you sought my hand in marriage, you said Fan would have a place at your table. Were you sincere? Or is she to be kept in the distant recesses of the house, brought out only on Boxing Day to greet the servants?"
Bravo Elizabeth!!

Looking up, I saw that my rejection stung,
Of course it stung you dolt! You reject everyone and everything to do with her. She is truly treated as nothing more than his property so why he should think she should feel more is beyond me. What will it take?

Rearing a ******* in your house will taint your name for generations."
I’m surprised Elizabeth didn’t punch her lights out! And Collins is out there feeding this, I’m sure. Hope something happens to prevent him from inheriting Longbourn...maybe one of those famous ‘Fatal Carriage Accidents'? LOL!

But of course, Darcy’s relatives are so kind and honest and considerate and loving...certainly they are much better than...what was it he used to describe Fan...
How can she take her place in society if she is allowed to grow up wild and untamed? She will embarrass us at every turn!"
Why would Fan embarrass anyone...Lady Catherine does quite well on her own! Arriving unannounced and uninvited...and good grief...the harridan even lied to her own brother! It will be interesting to see how the earl reacts once Lady Catherine is gone.

Still, I think Darcy is a very selfish ‘creature’! He has shown no warmth or caring for anyone but himself! His resentment is so deep that he can’t see that Mrs. Abernathy merely spoke friendly to Fan and she became a very friendly and well-behaved 2-year old. The child is frightened of him...period! She knows he doesn't like her. Children can sense these things. What is it going to take for him to begin to attempt to thaw...cause if he doesn’t...then Lizzy needs to apply for sainthood to put up with him!

How does any of this compare to how he and Georgiana were raised? Maybe when they get to Pemberley Mrs Reynolds can cut through the ice and resentment that consumes Darcy. Something has to shake him up because he is becoming no better than Wickham and his resentment for Darcy!

And Wickham is still out there! I was afraid he would try something when Lizzy went to her aunts alone.

Oh Jan...there is so much going on and so much that can happen! I’m just so anxious to see what is going to happen next! Excellent writing as usual! I can already tell this will be another JanH story I will read again and again. And congratulations on getting 2 of your stories published. Definitely gotta add them to my kindle and our Library, too!

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William is never going to win over ODG with that attitude.
And poor Fan, at least Mrs. A seems like a good choice.
Aunt Cat., I'm glad Darcy defended Elizabeth in front of her.

Irene

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Poor Mr. Darcy, his Aunt is not entirely wrong: bringing up a ******* did taint families during the Regency Era, and would have most definitely lessened Georgiana's chances for a good marriage. All the more admirable of him, then, to stand by Elizabeth. And good for him to get the good woman Mrs. Abernathy,as even Elizabeth conceded that Fan is "spoilt rotten". As her social standing is rather shaky, Fan would need to have excellent manners and education to balance that.

I hope Elizabeth stops referring to Fan as "my child", though, as I (along with Mr. Darcy) look forward to the sweet happily everafter when she has her own child. Their child. It's going to be a long and bumpy road, but so worth the wait. Thanks, Jan!

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"Come now, sir, you must understand when I am teasing, or this marriage shall prove quite tedious."

Love your Elizabeth, JanH! Lines like that are just delicious. Another great chapter.

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I say things are looking good! Even though Darcy is still behaving like an ass, but at least he is attuned to Elizabeth's feelings and willing to calm down and reason with her. Hope the nurse he has engaged is a truly nice lady. I think after witnessing how Darcy came to her defence in front of Lady C, Lizzy would be more appreciative now (i truly hope!!). Thanks for another great chapter!

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Well, I for one am glad Darcy was upstanding when it came to his wife, concerning his aunt's behavior. The fact that his uncle stayed behind to leave with Richard was also most satisfying and Elizabeth pointing out the door and Catherine's carriage was the coup de grace. Bravo Elizabeth. I hope D&E can at least come to some common ground after this.

Loved little Fran waking up Darcy like only a true toddler would. It would have been a real cute scene had Darcy decided to check himself and not yell.

Another wonderful chapter Jan.

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