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teb

May 19, 2011 - 3:18PM

Re: The Power of a Good Sonnet by Malena

So happy to read another story by Malena.
Wow, this is going to be good. All 4 daughters married before Elizabeth and now she is lonely. I don't know if what Mr. Bennet's decision is a good one, though I think not.
Can't wait to read more and how Darcy fits into all of this.

Abigail

May 23, 2011 - 4:34PM

Re: The Power of a Good Sonnet by Malena

What a promising beginning! I can hardly wait to see how this story will develop...
Malena, will there be a new chapter every week?

Malena

May 23, 2011 - 5:29PM

Re: The Power of a Good Sonnet by Malena

The story is well unfolded already. Problem is the dear proofreader. One of them has just moved and I cannot ask her anything. The other is a teacher so she does what she can. Until summer posts will be subjected to her free time.Glad you like it.
*smooches*

taryn

May 26, 2011 - 12:26PM

Re: The Power of a Good Sonnet by Malena

Poor Lizzy's got no admirers, or does she?
Will Mr. B's attempt to cheer her backfire?
Can't wait for more

laura

May 27, 2011 - 6:39AM

Re: The Power of a Good Sonnet by Malena

Wow, I am intrigued! What an original, clever premise! Lizzy is in an unusual situation, to be sure. Does her father know what he's doing? The potential for hurt feelings and misunderstandings is great. Can't wait to see how Darcy is pulled into your story. Looking forward to more!

Malena

May 28, 2011 - 12:13AM

Re: The Power of a Good Sonnet by Malena

Thank you all for your kind words. Chapter 2 is in the hands of dear proofreader and will be posted as soon as she sends it back.
hugs
Malena

Renée O

May 28, 2011 - 6:08PM

Re: The Power of a Good Sonnet by Malena

My dears, here it is! Chapter 2. Enjoy!

Abigail

May 29, 2011 - 6:26PM

Re: The Power of a Good Sonnet by Malena

Loved this chapter!!! I liked the peek into Darcy's thoughts. This Mr Darcy deserved Luzzy's censure, for sure!

I can't wait for the nexy chapter!

teb

May 30, 2011 - 4:58AM

Re: The Power of a Good Sonnet by Malena

Oh, that was good!
I love the way the Colonel called out his cousin in a round about way.

Poor Mr. Darcy, sometimes his opinions are not quite his own. Feeling a little rejected before he gets rejected.

Well, I hope he doesn't stew about it for too long.

Great chappie Malena.

taryn

Jun 2, 2011 - 1:07AM

Re: The Power of a Good Sonnet by Malena

conceited, arrogant, selfish and disdainful of the feelings of others
Well that perfectly describes this Mr. Darcy.
Hope Lizzy visits Chatsworth and the Colonel takes a liking to her. That should really put Darcy in a mood! And what of the secret admirer, has he written to her yet?

Delightful story! Thanks

lucy6526

Jun 2, 2011 - 2:59AM

Re: The Power of a Good Sonnet by Malena

Oh, this is fun! I love how the colonel knows just what his cousin has done. Thanks for starting this new story, Malena--love it already!