Poor Lizzy's got no admirers, or does she?
Will Mr. B's attempt to cheer her backfire?
Can't wait for more

Wow, I am intrigued! What an original, clever premise! Lizzy is in an unusual situation, to be sure. Does her father know what he's doing? The potential for hurt feelings and misunderstandings is great. Can't wait to see how Darcy is pulled into your story. Looking forward to more!

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Thank you all for your kind words. Chapter 2 is in the hands of dear proofreader and will be posted as soon as she sends it back.
hugs
Malena

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My dears, here it is! Chapter 2. Enjoy!

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Loved this chapter!!! I liked the peek into Darcy's thoughts. This Mr Darcy deserved Luzzy's censure, for sure!

I can't wait for the nexy chapter!

Oh, that was good!
I love the way the Colonel called out his cousin in a round about way.

Poor Mr. Darcy, sometimes his opinions are not quite his own. Feeling a little rejected before he gets rejected.

Well, I hope he doesn't stew about it for too long.

Great chappie Malena.

conceited, arrogant, selfish and disdainful of the feelings of others
Well that perfectly describes this Mr. Darcy.
Hope Lizzy visits Chatsworth and the Colonel takes a liking to her. That should really put Darcy in a mood! And what of the secret admirer, has he written to her yet?

Delightful story! Thanks

Oh, this is fun! I love how the colonel knows just what his cousin has done. Thanks for starting this new story, Malena--love it already!

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