Mrs Darcy has a wonderful weekend surprise for you, my dears. Chapter 1 of Ayden's classic modern retelling of P&P "Ebb and Flow" is up. Enjoy and give her some love.
my oh my! what an intriguing beginning! I loved 'The Great Game' and I am falling under the spell of this one. And I appreciate Elizabeth being tall, as I am practically an amazon, it makes me feel as if I have a chance at Mr. Darcy... I do hope you post a new chapter soon, keep up the good work!
I love, love, love this story! I am so happy it is to be posted here--- thank you so much for this! I'm so excited. For those that have yet to read it-- you are in for quite a treat! Love this Darcy and Elizabeth. Makes my heart go pitter-patter just to think about their chemistry.
This, I believe was my first "mature" modern fan fic piece... and I was so spoiled to have it as such!
So for all of you who have not read this piece, you're in for a delightful treat. Of course, anyone who knows Ayden's writing is well aware of her ability to give us delicious things!
Diane, Ebb and Flow and The Great Game are such very different stories and E&F is a much shorter story... both are fabulous in their own way... and Ayden's style is always so lush. You'll definitely enjoy!
So glad she took off her Manolo Blahniks before walking on the beach. Getting them sandy would be a crime! Yummy drink, yummy kissing.....nice long satisfying chapter!
I like how Lizzy sorted out her thoughts and came to realise she's afraid. And Darcy! admitted to himself he's in love
I think there's a little blip in this sentence : "They staggered up the steps, Jane deliberately making lots of noise.....". It's Charlotte right? That said, I wonder when she and Charles will realise they are not meant to be, and will Jane be coming into this story. Can't wait for more!
I forget who the cigar-owner is! Wickham? I am tickled that I don't remember this story asw well as I thought. That makes the re-read all the sweeter!No, Darcy is hardly satiated. I am guessing he is just getting started. Excellent chapter. It's just starting to steam up
Oooooh, Wickham is never good news. Thanks for bringing Jane to Florida. She can help Elizabeth not be alone with Darcy until she is ready. Thanks for the steamy chapter, Ayden!
Ah, Ayden, you certainly make things heat up when our two lovebirds are alone together. Too bad it looks as though we'll have to suffer a little (please, only a little??? ) before we get some more.
Ayden, your Darcys (yes, plural - to cover several of your stories) are among my most favorite. If you have any extras about I would be pleased to have one! This story is one of my all time favorites. Can't get enough. Roselle
So George was her first? I was hoping he wasn't. Loved naked Charles in the bathroom! Loved the new chapters. Poor Elizabeth!!
She will probably believe everything he said about William.