Wow Renee! New chapters are coming out fast and furious!
Phew! My heart almost stopped when Darcy almost died. But thank god with the supreme power of love, he managed to pull thru. Sophie, great suspense description in the death or near death scenario of Darcy's. Also wonderful input on the other characters' feelings and thoughts. Look forward to what's going to happen next!
Thanks for all the great feedback so far. I'm really glad to know that you are enjoying the story as much as I am writing it. Yes, already our beloved couple have been through so much but I come from Yorkshire and the weather ALWAYS ruins best laid plans.
As Renée has said already, lots of chapters are already written and I am hoping to finish the story soon. It will be in my 22nd year, I promise.
Anyway, thank you again for all the wonderful comments, you all make it worthwhile and keep me going.
As LC would put it..."You give your opinion very decidedly for so young a person..."Only 22? It is very difficult to find so young a person interested in writing.Good for you...and keep going. As to my dear Renee. You cannot complain now...so please after the severe fasting we have been subjected to..... do you not think we deserve a feast?
I try not to read too many WIP, but just glanced at yours and could not stop! WOW! My heart stopped when the whole twist happened when Georgianna wanted Darcy to choose between her or Elizabeth. Love how you show each characters feelings and reactions to the story, and I can't wait for more! This has been a wonderful read so far. Keep up the GREAT work!
Oh my Gosh Sophie, The weight on my heart has been so overwhelming, I can literally feel Lizy and Darcy's pain. Your writing is so compelling I can't wait to read more. I too, once I started to read this story, could not stop. Waiting for more, julia
Love this new story line. It's awesome!!! Can't wait to see what happened with Georgiana. I have to say that I love that you gave Goergiana that typical teen rebelion attitude. Sounds so real and Caroline's selfish ways are to the extreme and really show the compassionate person within when she regrets them. I tend to like her in this story. i think its going to turn out that Lizzy is expecting. I was a little shocked at that scene but totally see it happening especially with the love they share. Can't wait to see what happens next.
I just wanted to say thanks for putting up the next chapter. I was so looking forward to their next encounter and to see how much they love each other. It does put a little fear into me regarding their relationship but I look to see how they overcome all they have ahead of them. Their love is so strong, and you can just feel it leap off the screen, but I wonder just how Georgianna and others will interfere with their happiness. Look forward to much, much more and hopefully very soon! It seems like a lifetime (although just a week) since your last chapters posted. But suspense makes it that much more pleasurable to read once it is there! Thanks again!
Sophie, I am so happy for Lizzy and Darcy, however I do hope they are discreet about there intimacy, I sure would hate it for Jane or Bingley to interfear causing any further pain for the lovers. And now that Georgie is on her way with Caroline and Fitz what will they think of Darcy's guests? Oh my!!! And Darcy's leg he must get better, mustn't he? Great writting Sophie you truely now how to captivate your readers. Keep up the good work.
How the lovers suffered but now united!
Their road to complete happiness is long i guess...Georgina has got to come back and set things right and Darcy should have all the support from his loved ones to be positive and make a complete recovery right? Please please tell us
Once again, I am loving this story! I think once Lizzy and Darcy get married and Georgiana and Darcy work out their differences that everything should be ok. Once they appear in London all together then everyone will see what lies were told. But if Lizzy does end up with child, it may not dispell all the rumors going around. Great job Sophie!!! can't wait for the next chapter.
Oh Sophie things are moving so quickly. Why can't everyone just leave L&D alone. It seems as though they are being tortured continuously and unrelenting; And for loving each other? And now Binley walks in on them, what on earth is going on?
Oh Sophie please save them for everyone around them are going mad.
Such a good change of a story! Who would have thought that the proper Darcy & Lizzie would be wild & hot for each other that they are always getting busted by Jane & Bingley!
I hope they get married before she gets pregnant?
I love the different story line that you have written! Who said it had to be proper and follow the same format I applaud your writing talents!
Thanks for all the great feedback again. I love reading about how much you are enjoying the stories. I also love it when people try to work out where the story is going. You guys come up with the best ideas!
Well, Darcy and Lizzy have been through so much more than the couple in the book. It was a natural progression to me for them to become more passionate when death was flashed before them. It has the ability to change everyone and it has. Jane and Bingley just don't realise this and so appear at every available opportunity to muck things up.
Hope you contiue to enjoy the story and once again, thankyou for the feedback. You make it all worth it.
Love it, love it! I just can't wait for the next chapter to come. There is so much passion but it is so weird to have another young couple in love not so understanding especially all that has happened to the young couple to try to keep them apart. I hope dearly that Georgianna will come and be accepting of Elizabeth and Darcy's relationship and will help put an end to all those nasty rumours! Just keep it coming! Can't wait to see more!
Wonderful, simply wonderful. I loved the reunion with the siblings and all the relationships moving full steam ahead. Let's just hope that Lady C doesn't cause too much disaster in her wake! Oh Sophie, this has been such a lovely story that I eagerly await more! I can't wait for the wedding! Keep up the GREAT writing!
Oh this is getting so good! I hope that LC will have to come see that Elizabeth and Darcy both love each other and will help restore each other's name! They have been through so much but I hope Elizabeth's reputation can be salvaged somewhat, but so look forward to the next stage in their relationship! Great work!
I have been remiss in telling you how I like this story !
But particulary this chapter put me in action - I had to let you know how much I appreciate the interraction Elizabeth - Darcy in your story... And I enjoy your style enormously - your way of alterning calm and action, crowdy noisy parlours and quiet dortoir conversation...
Thank you - I have just the impulse of re-readingit all from the beginning...
A happy chapter indeed! So glad to see our beloved couple can finally settle down with all the blessings from their friends and family. But the last bit when Mr Bennet overheard their conversation...oh dear...i hope he will not dwell too much on that sentence.
any idea of when we might get another chapter from this juicy story? It is so good, I hope we get an update soon!
Keep up the great work and this story has been captivating from the very first chapter! We hope you will post soon! Great writing and although I can see the light through the clouds and know the end will be coming soon but I hope this won't be the end to your story writing and I hope there will be another story on the heel of this one because you are a great writer! Thanks again!
Just thought I would write a short note to see if another chapter will post soon? I feel so spoiled by getting two chapters at a time. But, writing entails a great creative mind, and concentration. Please know that you have fans of your story who want to know your words!
Eager fan awaiting more chapters of Lizzy & Darcy!!