Ellen, sorry for being late in commenting on this beautiful end to your lovely story. It's was awesome!!

I particularly liked the fact that Georgiana didn't lose the baby, it was conceived with love on her side at least, so I think it would have been terrible for her to have a miscarriage. Besides something good resulted of that marriage after all, as I'm sure she will be a lovely girl like her mother. Yet, like Darcy I'm also very relieved that the child can't be called George Wickham!!

D&L lovely hot reunion was...eh...burning indeed!!! and I'm very glad Darcy&Lizzy's first time at Pemberley was even better than he had imagined (especially for Lizzy...darn lucky girl!!!)

Thank you for delighting us with such a wonderful story, Ellen, it's definitely one of my top favorite fanfics! You're a very talented authoress!!!

Thanks so much, Maria Teresa. Great big kiss to you!

Speaking of hot, have you read "The Lesson" yet? I promise you will NOT be disappointed!

Disappointed? Moi? You'll be able to guess my answer to this question in The Lesson's comments thread...

I've shamefully neglected to thank everyone else who wrote such wonderful comments. What can I say? You ladies are the greatest.

Ellen -

Just loved this story - so clever how you weaved in various lines from P&P and had different people saying them or working them in at different times. That was fun.

Just an intriguing story overall - a real page turner for me and I thank you.

I'm sure your fans are hoping that you'll be writing more in the future!

I have just discovered your terrific work here but have I missed something. I have only been able to read up to Chapter 16 but I also read some of your fan postings which lead to me to think I have read all the chapters. Can you tell me where else I might be able to find them? After reading Chapter 16 it just says continued but nothing to link to. HELP!!!!!! Desperate to get my darcy/lizzy fix!! Love your story-- so original and well written! Thanks so much!!

I had that same problem. Go back to the chapter index and click on chapter 17. That worked for me. Good Luck. Mo

You either refresh your page or have a little patience, ,cause it can take a while if your pc is not that fast. Links are working.

I,m away on holidays but would not want youto miss your favorite stories. ;)

Christina:

I've just returned from vacation. I hope your problem has been resolved and that you have been able to access the final chapters. Please let me know if you are still having difficulties.

I have just finished this fantastic story.
Ellen, thank you for the exciting time.
I think I started reading this somewhere else
but never got to finish it. I loved every bit of it!

P.S. The link at the end of chapter 16 still doesn't
work but chapter 17 was accesible in the story index
so no problem.

P.S. The link at the end of chapter 16 still doesn't
work but chapter 17 was accesible in the story index
so no problem.

I've fixed it, Lucy. Thanks for the heads-up

Glad you enjoyed it, Lucy.

There's another full-length story on its way.

There's another full-length story on its way.

OMG OMG OMG OMG... Can't wait!!!!!!!

Hi Ellen,

I finished HBK earlier this week and wanted to tell you how very much I enjoyed it. Such a twist on canon! You totally had me hook, line and sinker.

Your "letter" was a stroke of genius! I have never seen the like. Wonderful.

Wickham trying to make a move on Lizzy only to be thwarted by Lady C. Darcy calling Wickham out and Wickham "fainting".

I didn't see Mr. Dorsett at all benign. I thought Wickham had him come steal something important from the townhouse. I completely bought that they were anticipating their vows. The wedding night... Yowza!

Fabulous story. Thank you for sharing it with us!

Hi Ellen, I just wanted to tell you that I have read this wonderful story while it was a wip and enjoyed it SOO very much. I am a member at two other JA fanfic sites and have recommended this story as an awesome read. I have also told all my fellow addicts (wink) about my love of your other stories as well.

You have a faithful reader here and will promote your stories to lovers of this genre.

Keep up the awesome work. Eye of the Beholder so far is proving again how wonderful a writer you are.

Thanks again for sharing your talent

Stacy ( member of AHA and HG)

Thanks, Wendy & Stacy! Your comments are music to an author's ears.

Serinah, please contact me at renee at mrsdarcy dot com? Thank you.

Ellen,

I re-read your wonderful story. Thanks again for the hours of enjoyment.

STEVIEB

Thank YOU, StevieB!!!

So the wicked Mr. W finally gets what he deserves!

Really enjoyed the story; it has kept me distracted and amused through a nasty bout of 'flu.

Thank you for posting it!

Glad you enjoyed the story, and I hope you're feeling better!!

Loved it also!!! I love being brand new when everything is unread!

Ellen, this is my first time to read this story, and I enjoyed it so much. I read it today in one sitting, and it was worth not doing any housework or eating anything until I was fnished. I plan to read the rest of your stories posted here.

Thank you for sharing your talent.

PatM,
Thanks so much for your flattering comments! It's been a very long time since anyone has said something so nice. Hope you enjoy the rest!

I loved the story! Poor Georgiana, did she end up finding a good guy in the end?
Great work! I really enjoyed reading the story!

Poor Georgiana, did she end up finding a good guy in the end?

I'd like to think so! Thanks for reading and responding!