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Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Not too long ?
Well, what if until tomorrow is TOO long already ?

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Well, what if until tomorrow is TOO long already

You greedy little thing, you...

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Who, me ?
*rising eyebrows innocently*
(and too lazy this morning for looking for an apropriate smiley )

Sure, blame me, I know you also can't wait, chère Renée - but this would be our secret !

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

but this would be our secret !

Exactement! Let's keep this between us...

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Might be interesting if Darcy were dead!

Please dont hate me!!!

But Wickham is a great villan here, properly bad, and he could make an entertaining story!

But of course I do love Darcy, so I would like to see him live.

Either way, im happy.

I'm not even going to beg for another chapter soon! How could I when I said you could kill off Darcy without distressing me too much!

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Thanks, Ellen!

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Good chapter! I think it has to be Wickham that is dead, since Georgiana was the one who received notification of the the death. Surely Lizzy would have been the first to receive news if Darcy had been killed. Of course, fanfic authors have been known to outrage the multitudes at times.

Looking forward to some reassurance in the next chapter.

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Oh my! I just caught up because I had not been getting emails from darcyfic when new chappies were posted...my my! What a delightful story, I really loved the carriage ride with Darcy and Wickham. Ellen, you are very clever and a great writer!
Sara

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Margaret F:

I think it has to be Wickham that is dead, since Georgiana was the one who received notification of the the death. Surely Lizzy would have been the first to receive news if Darcy had been killed.

Have you considered that the Colonel would not have known Darcy had gotten married? Think about it: Were this the case, Georgiana would be Darcy's next of kin (not to mention the heir to Pemberley]. Remember, of Darcy's family, only Lady Catherine was aware he intended to marry, and only Georgiana attended.

Sara:

I had not been getting emails from darcyfic when new chappies were posted

I am no longer posting at darcyfic. You may want to check the "Notify me" box at this board to be informed of a new posting.

LisaJ:

Might be interesting if Darcy were dead!

Surely I wouldn't.... Would I??????


Everyone:

Thanks for all the intriguing speculation! I promise the wait will not be long.

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Oh Ellen, I have no nails left and it has been eight days. 8 long, long days. Please!!!!

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

I'm so sorry, Mo (and everyone else I've left hanging). My bad! It's exam time for my kids, and so real life has intruded upon more interesting things. I promise to grab some more time for myself and get Chapter 19 fit to be seen as soon as possible.

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Thanks Ellen! I hope your kids do (or did if they're finished) well on their exams! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

I bet your kids did well, dear Ellen!

And... our esteemed authoress did think of your sufferings, dear readers, here's chapter 19. Enjoy!

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

It was worth the waiting !

What can I say ? this man knows how to write a letter ! Photobucket - Video and Image Hosting


And now - let's see Mrs.Bennet swooning over Darcy and his 10 thousand... Or maybe not ?!

I can't even begin to imagine what's more in store for us and I love it this way !

Thanks !

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Hehehe! Wickham is out of the way! Poor Georgina but it's all for the better. She deserves someone who truly appreciate her for the person she is. Now looking forward to the Saturday at Hertfordshire

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Well, I am relieved that it was not Darcy that fell victim to Lord M_____'s vengeance. I can't help but feel sorrow for that poor little baby, born to a promiscuous mother and an angry adoptive father. One can only pray for loving mentors to influence the poor child's development.

Now I join in Lizzy's anticipation of her reunion with her husband.

Loved Fitzwilliam's letter to Lizzy, Ellen, excellent way to tell us how events unfolded.

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

My dear, dear friend.
Everything you write is just delightful.SmileyCentral.comI wish you could take up full time writing and delight us with your talent endlessly. I just love your manly Darcy . He is just the man one would wish to have in the real world...Thank you so much to help us enhance our...imagination.
Looking forward to their reunion...Mmmmmmm

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

I know it's toooo soon to be thinking of this, but I wonder if the Colonel should marry Georgianna?? She seems to like him and back then cousins did marry cousins. Hmmm...Ellen~ I never can guess the next steps in the story so I shouldn't even try!
Loved the chapter, and am waiting for the next!

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

I guess no one really expected me to kill Darcy. After all, how could I kill off the perfect man? There are so few of them around!

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Oh, Ellen, you sly wench! Not only is Lord M's wife pregnant with Wickham's child, but she has the nerve to lustfully check Darcy out in front of her husband AND her lover! That just cracked me up. Thanks for a great chapter...can't wait for E & D's reunion.

Mimi

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Thanks for such a wonderful chapter, Ellen! I can't wait until Darcy and Elizabeth are together again!

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

What a GREAT story! I am so enjoying it. I love Georgiana but I do hope that she miscarries as this will be the end of the Wickham bloodline.(Sorry, Georgie)Looking forward to the next post.

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

she has the nerve to lustfully check Darcy out in front of her husband AND her lover!

MimiB, I must confess that was my favorite part of this chapter!

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Another great installment,Ellen. Keep up the good work, I am hooked!

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Yet another whopper! Thanks so much Ellen! But I must ask...did you intend to change the name of Alston Hall to Alston House halfway through the story? I would never have noticed except that I actually have a friend named...Alston Hall. I took quite a lot of pleasure in seeing his name in print, and was quite disappointed when it was changed ;)

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Sara:

No, that was just an ooops on my part. It's what comes of not going back to previous chapters to check for continuity. My bad. Thanks for keeping me honest. (And how odd that I actually picked a person's name. Strictly a coincidence, I assure you!)

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Ellen,

Thank you for another wonderful chapter! I for one am glad that Wickham is dead, and Georgiana will be the better for it! Now I am ready to see Darcy & Elizabeth get back together and start their "honeymoon." LOL

Please post soon!

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Ellen,
I hope you know I was just teasing, as I love your story, and it was just a very bizarre thing to read my friend's name. Didn't want you to think I was picking on you! Your story is awesome and don't let someone like me make you think anything otherwise!
Sara

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Sara, I know your message was written affectionately, and I took no offense. But it is odd to find someone with that name! I thought I was going to great lengths to write something "original"

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Oops, ellen, I should have noticed too, perhaps...


Anyway, however friendly meant (we are a friendly bunch, aren't we? ), I'd appreciate it very much if mistakes in stories are communicated directly to the author or through me by e-mail, and not in the message forum. Just to avoid misunderstandings.

I will take care of instant adjustment, naturally.

Thanks!

Renée

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Thanks, Renee, you are a peach!

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Ellen, thank you for killing off Wickham! Yay! Now, what is in store in Hertsfordshire?

Julie

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Now, what is in store in Hertsfordshire?

Oh, maybe a lovely reunion....

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Thank you, Ellen, wonderful chapter!!

I didn't think you were going to kill Darcy, but I did fear he would be harmed somehow ... I'm so relieved now , I knew I should have trusted you more!!

Lol! Loved that lascivious look Lady M___ threw on Darcy. But poor man! I don't think it will be the last time women will look at him in that way...

Poor Georgiana, though, even if Wickham's death was for the best. And if she loses the baby, it will another hard blow. But it's so good that the good colonel will there to help her recover, whatever happens.

I look forward to the next chapter, and particularly the lovely reunion

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Oh, did I say a lovely reunion? I meant hot. Hot, hot, hot.

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Indeed!SmileyCentral.com

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Whew!!!!! So happy that Darcy is alive and uninjured.
What a pickle ole Wickham got himself into. I think that Georgiana needs to know all about her dead husband. No one needs to tell her, if there would be some way she could read Darcy's letter to Lizzy. I know it would be cruel, but she needs her eyes opened.
Great story.

Thank you

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

So glad to know it wasn't Mr. darcy. Looking forward to the happy & hot reunion

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

..happy, hot and URGENT reunion !
is tomorrow urgent enough ?

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Alas, Michaela, Chapter 20 is not yet ready for my readers, although the reunion scene is.

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Darn it... I'm checking my mailbox all day long...

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

IdemSmileyCentral.com

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Oh, Ellen, but I don't think anyone would mind ! Only that scene will do !

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Ellen. What can I say? Most delightful my dear. Your keen description of amorous congress realLy takes anyone's breath awaySmileyCentral.com
The story will remain for ever among my favourite ones and your gorgeous description of Mr Darcy's most hot instances I will keep in my...heart?

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Goodness, almost forgot the announcement here. Chapter 20 and the epilogue are up, dear fans!

I agree with everything Eli said in the previous post. And I like to add that you two ladies, Eli and Ellen, never cease to amaze me! Your wonderful personalities, including your talents brighten my day.

R~

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

We make quite a pair, don't we? Still, we are both ever sensible of the warmest gratitude towards the person who has been the means of uniting us!SmileyCentral.com

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Wow, what an ending. This story has been a wonderful journey. I hope to be able to settle down this evening and enjoy it again in its completed form.

I hope you have another planned in the near future as I will read it with relish.

Thank you so much.

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Thank you Ellen for your wonderful story, which i now intend to read all over again, and for being so reliable in your postings. I truly love your sense of humor. This has been a lovely journey!

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Thank you Ellen for this wonderful story, I loved every word of it! Loved the little bit of Darcy's memories of all the different places at Longbourn he and Lizzy spent "ahem-ing." i also liked it how Darcy remembers his daydream, and realizes he's living it! Good show!

I hope you have another one in the works, I love your stories!

Julie

Re: "His Brother's Keeper" by Ellen G

Thank you Ellen! I loved this turn of this story from the original. Reading it was a pleasure!

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