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Re: When duty Calls by Belén
Belen, I'm so sorry this story will be ending soon, but, even with the angst, which I know a story must have, I have enjoyed it so much. I think it was even better the second time around.
Thank you for sharing your talent with us. 
Oh happy days! Finally this couple are DOING something productive! 
I hope there's no more misunderstanding..they have suffered enough. Look forward to new update on Sunday
YooHoo!....Belen!....Where Are You!!!!?
Hi Sandy!
I know, I'm supposed to post today. My beta is having a busy time and she couldn't sent the chapter back to me yet. I hope I'll be able to post tomorrow!
Thanks for your patience!
Hugs
Be
I know, I'm supposed to post today. My beta is having a busy time and she couldn't sent the chapter back to me yet. I hope I'll be able to post tomorrow!
Thanks for your patience!
Hugs
Be
My DH is now giving me a bit frown for all the whining I am now doing!
However, since it is the holidays and I know your beta is probably very, very busy...I'll wait patiently!
Hugs to you both for putting up with my whining!
Sandy
Re: When duty Calls by Belén
So romantic, so sweet, so beautifully written!
Chapter 21 is up, my dears. Enjoy! 
Thank you belen and Mrs Darcy. 
That was a brilliant chapter.
At long last they are communicating..... and some!
They have begun to expel their demons by doing just that....communicating
Darcy is proving to be a passionate, caring and considerate lover. I loved how he gave Elizabeth time and space to 'refresh' herself, after their first night of fun and frolics. 
So sad that it will end soon
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My review of When Duty Calls 
A big sigh! for Darcy and Lizzy to finally have clousure to all their demons. Lovely chapter Belen. I hate the thought it's coming to a "The End" irene
Re: When duty Calls by Belén
At last, they are communicating and reaching a better understanding of themselves and their marriage. The only thing that makes me sad is that this story will not last much longer. Perhaps, Belen, you would be willing to give us another of your excellent stories?
Thanks for the very sweet chapter. Everything about it was lovely & romantic!
Lovely chapter. Ditto what everybody else wrote; its wonderful that D&E finally understand one another. 
Thank you, Belén and Renée.
Cheers,
Julia B
Their together they together YEAH. How long will it take for Georgie to realize why Darcy is so changed all of a sudden?
Thanks for sharing
Geri
After all the stops and starts, they are finally in tune together! Thanks for yet another wonderful chapter
Vicious Caroline! Ugh!
Darcy defending her family,great.
Sweet interaction between D&E
More please irene
"If I do not object to them, then they should be nothing to you." Darcy disengaged himself from her hold. "Allow me to remind you that they'll soon become your relatives, too, Miss Bingley, so in the meanwhile, I would appreciate if you spoke of my family with more consideration. Now if you would excuse me, I must join my wife."
Ahhh Caroline! She never takes a hint or even a 2x4 across the head!!! Even the setdown after dinner was priceless!
Thank you for your wonder ability to set the scene just perfect! I wanted to give Miss Bingley her 2x4 in full force!
Anxiously waiting for more, Belen!
May I confess something? I liked your HMS chapters very much, but I liked this chapter of their familial bliss even more--Darcy extending himself to her family puts me in raptures. Such a dear, good man--the best of men, indeed. And she is the lively, playful and intelligent mate he so richly deserves. What a couple!
P.S. Always a pleasure to see Caroline ask for a set-down and get it in spades.
P.S. Always a pleasure to see Caroline ask for a set-down and get it in spades.
I agree, the HMS was great, but I loved Lizzy's noisy kiss on his cheek, and his tickling her, the new ease they have with each other.
Miss Bingley was her usual nasty self. Had I been there I would have been tempted to slap the fire out of her. And she wonders why Darcy didn't choose her?!
I'm so pleased she and the Hursts won't be invited to Pemberley for Christmas.
This was one of my favorite chapters, Belen.
I don't know which was nicer--Darcy's kindness to Mrs. Bennet or his sharpness with Miss Bingley. They were both great moves on his part. I am glad Mr. Bennet apologized, too. Lovely, lovely chapter!
I love how you are bring these two together. Their love and playfulness makes me smile.
Geri
Brilliant chapter. Loved it.
Darcy and Elizabeth are totally at ease with each other now, as evidenced by their lovely larking about.
Loved Darcy's support for Mrs Bennett and his wonderful put down of Caroline Bingley.
Caroline can be in no doubt now who Darcy loves.
Thank you belen
Hi girls!
Don't think I forget about you, my dears readers, I had a very hectic week and I didn't have time to reply to your comments individually. But that doesn't mean I'm not reading them!
Chapter 23 will take a few more days, I started working on it just yesterday and is now in my beta's hands. After that comes the epilogue and it's over!
You know, while I am happy that I'm finishing this story and will be able to move on to other ones, I know I'll miss your comments and your insight. This has been an extraordinary experience. Thanks for your appreciation! It's been my pleasure to share this story with you.
Thank you my readers, thank you Elena, my wonderful beta and thank you Renée for this wonderful site!
Hugs
Belén
Sniffle, sniffle 
dabbing my eyes with a tissue
Belén, I very sad this story will soon be ending,
...but I am relieved to know that you will coninue to grace us with more of your stories!!!
Happy Holidays!
Cheers,
Julia B
Chapter 23, the last one, is up, my dears. The epilogue will follow soon!
Re: When duty Calls by Belén
This chapter was bittersweet. I loved it, but felt sad that only the epilogue remains. I will miss these Darcys very much, but hopefully you will have another story for us soon.
Thank you Belen for a wonderful story.
The last chapter, I hate to see it end but am looking forward to the epi. Hope your muse keeps you busy with more stories. Irene
This chapter provided the sweet and satisfying fluff that can be had once you have laid a foundation of angst that grabbed us and made us care. You scared us, made us cry, made us wonder how much the two would suffer before they came together.
Not saying there are not good, even great stories that are totally fluff--there are!--but this is the kind of story where the pain was pleasurable and the pleasure-- well, all the more so. I have enjoyed this and almost wish you could pad it out a bit with several more chapters before the epilogue. I would be happy to read them. But I'll take what I get and say thank you.
Very sweet chapter. Thank you, Belén!
Cheers,
Julia B
Little Darcy on the way As always, another lovely chapter. Thank you, Belen!
I am having some computer problem and have lost my attempts at replying to this sweet chapter, Belen. It was a wonderful opportunity for the Darcys to repeat their wedding vows. Thank you!
The epilogue - and a very satisgying it is - has been posted, dear readers. Enjoy and don't forget to post your comment!
You're amazing, Belén, I've loved every minute of this fantastic Regency what-if! Thank you so much , and I'm eagerly looking forward to a new story. 
First, I thought you'd want to know that your link isn't working. I had to go through the Mrs. Darcy's website to access it.
To the epilogue. It was wonderful to have an update on what had been happening to the Bennet girls, especially Lizzy. Three children, and they are still in love. What a wonderful story, Belen. I'm so glad I had the chance to read it again. Now, what do you have in store for your fans? I know I will love it.
Nothing wrong with the link, dear Pat, try refreshing your page, that might help.
Everyone married and happily settled. Thank you Belen and looking forward to your next story. Irene
Nothing wrong with the link, dear Pat, try refreshing your page, that might help.
I tried that and still couldn't access it.
Gee, how odd, Pat. I don't know what it is then. I checked and it works. 
I checked and it works. Maybe it's my computer. No matter, I was able to read it, and that's what's important
Big thank you, Belen, for such a wonderful story! It's great to see the Bennet family has evolved into a bigger family That was a lovely epilogue, and I eagerly look forward to your next story
Belen, thank you so much for your wonderful story. Though I couldn't wait to read more with every installment, I am sorry to see it end. I hope you have another planned soon!
THANK YOU!
Re: When duty Calls by Belén
this is great belen..i always enjoy forced marriages kind of story for E&D
plus i love love luurrve when there is a little lizzy in the story...and a well behaved little darcy of course..
it has been a long wait(for me) and i just want to tell you that that was a really cute and heartwarming epilogue..
thank u so much!
Thanks for reposting it on here. One of my favs!
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