Eli, what a wonderful start! Great way to entice us in! You just want us to nag you like you've nagged the other authors, don't you?? LOL
Can't wait for more. Love the idea of Darcy's frustration (mean of me, I know) but how sad that Darcy never proposed again, that they had an elicit moment (can't we have an outtake over Georgiana's coming out???? It would be such fun to read!) and how tragic that Lizzy sent him that letter.
Thank you for your kind words.It means a world for us authors(ha, author!)to have this feedback. You will have it all, I promise, in good time. I had a terrific time writing the story.
Thank you again and I hope you enjoy it!
Oh my god! That was wonderful. Totally different and refreshing. Please tell me that Elizabeth is waiting for William. And how in the world Catherine knew about them? How is it that since they were caught in such a state that they were not married instead? I think I have to read it again. Excellent start and I definitely can't wait to read the rest. Excellent!
Oh wow! Interesting start to a new story! I am shock to learn that 5 years had passed since the "memorable" night with Lizzy! Poor Darcy has to endure 5 years of pain and loneliness! I wonder what's Lizzy story...keep your story rolling Eli
Oh, how cruel...I'm now addicted to another WIP! As if waiting anxiously for Tanya, Renee and Ellen were not enough, now Eli you have hooked me as well. Great job, but please give us more juicy details (the sooner the better)! Congratulations on your great effort.
WOW ! What an incredible debut of a story ! Definetely hooking !
How come that he had actually refused her 5 years back ? How bigger that her previous dislike must be now the hatred for being thus rejected !
I kinda like the fact that he has not consumed his marriage - but has he been faithfull all this time ? Has he been keeping a mistress or contenting of dreaming of what had not been in that room ? And most of all what about Elizabeth ? Has she married (Please, NO !) ?... How many questions encore and only you know the answer !
Please post soon and frequently and... most of all, do assure me: do you like happy cannon ends ?...
love the fact that you have had Lizzy refuse him 5yr back beacasue he wasn't sure so he went ahead n married Anna
i really can't wait i hope Jane and Bingly accidenlty bring them toghether i can't wait for the next chapter
Dearest. I am not sure whether marrying Darcy to his cousin can be called canonical. Anyway, I definitely tried to keep characters as they have been depicted in JA's book, just a bit more overt at their displays of emotions. And as regards happy endings. Fear not!
YW, Elen. Did anybody else have problems with the colour? It was a bit unclear perhaps, although I had no problem reading myself. Maybe it depends on the kind of screen, regular or LCD. Anyway, black is better in this case and not conflicting with the design (which is important for me .
What an intriguing first chapter. Like everyone else I can't wait for the next chapter. I also wonder if we will find out soon what has happened to Elizabeth. Since the news of the encounter was out I don't expect she is married since she would be consider a "fallen" women? But I would hate to see Elizabeth the last 5 years lonely and thinking of Darcy. I hope she has found happiness in her life??? Please post soon!
Oh, once again thank you for your words. I am so relieved you people like the story. I read your messages every day. Yes, Darcy's morals are high, aren't they? But dread not my friends. There will be some fun, soon.
Eli, if I remember correctly you are from Argentina. I am too, though I live in the U.S. Your English is so perfect...where did you learn to speak/write so fluently? I love your story and can't wait to read more. Thank you for throwing your hat into the fanfiction arena!
My English is the result of almost twenty years at the Joaquin V Gonzalez teachers training college. I thank you for the aknowledgment. Mrs Navaz(my very devoted language teacher) would be delighted. I also read a lot!!!
Eli my dear, Ijust knew it that you can write so well especially when it comes to Darcy matters..your posts in the forum has always been entertaining...I just love your angle..it is so different and thank god his previous wife is no longer alive (hmm..sounds so cruel but I hate to see Darcy loving others..) ..pl post the sequel soon
Eli my dear, Ijust knew it that you can write so well especially when it comes to Darcy matters..your posts in the forum has always been entertaining and eloquent...I just love your angle..it is so different and thank god his previous wife is no longer alive (hmm..sounds so cruel but I hate to read Darcy loving others..a true blue D&E fan) ..pl post the sequel soon and please dont stop...
Elena, Boy Darcy is in quite a mess this time. Choosing Anne over Lizzy Oh My, Oh My . I do hope she is the one in the gazebo and she is not married or he may surely go mad. Good writing you have my complete attention. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Well!! That was a wicked place to stop! Poor, frustrated Darcy....blossoming at the simple thought of Elizabeth even as he is required to fend off a herd of greedy females clamoring across Ann's body to get to him.
I confess to feeling like a voyeur...or maybe a gawker at a train wreck. I can't turn away from the drama!
By the way Eli...this "Darcy had never known private intimacy with a lady; not even an innocent brushing kiss, save those bestowed on usually gloved hands or either his chaste sister's or wife's cheek. But of course, there was one unique occasion in which he had dared to dream. That one time when he had passionately kissed and loved Miss Bennet" -
wow Eli..this is definitely a new Darcy..an "innocent Darcy"..are we talking about a volcano about to burst here...hmm..can we have more soooon...
Yes you are enjoying yourself torturing us right, Elena?
We still don't know who the familiar voice belonged to, and you have added one more suspense on Colonel's involvement. It is funny though, to read about his thoughts on Lizzy, esp after listening to Darcy's continuous rumination