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Geri: Nos they are heading somewhere
Gio: You’re welcome!
Maria Hope: I’m happy that you’re happy! That was a major slip of tongue for Elizabeth and every fangirl’s dream!
Lucy: This Georgiana is not only sweet, but incredibly naïve.
Thank you my faithful readers!
Chapter 15 is up, my dears. Enjoy! 
When I finished reading this chapter, I let out a contented sigh. They are finally at Pemberley. I wonder how long before she lets him know he would be welcomed in her bed. I believe Pemberley will work it's magic over them.
Having read all your stories before, I should not have been concerned with the angst that came first. I am such an emotional reader, though.
Thanks for the new chapter, Belan. I enjoyed it very much, and feel hopeful for their future. 
WooHoo! Belén! They made it to Pemberley and WOW! What a trip!
Meeting for tea in Lizzy's room...then the innocent nap in the carriage with Lizzy using Darcy as a pillow while wrapped up in his arms...*sizzle, sizzle*! Now, we're getting somewhere. It's time to put all the misunderstandings aside and begin to work on mending their relationship.
I am enjoying this story so much and the way you described the scenes at the inn and in the carriage gave me so much hope for our D&E's future intimacy!
I was so happy and contented after this post! Thank you so much and I can't wait for next Sunday to see what you have coming up!
Sandy
Re: When duty Calls by Belén
That was a truly exquisite chapter belen.
I loved how Darcy seemed to anticipate Elizabeth's anxiety about moving to Pemberley and becoming it's Mistress, and put her at her ease.
She too is becoming more aware of him both emotionally and...........physically.
I loved the scene in the carriage, both so comfortable and at ease with each other's close proximity, and for awhile, totally oblivious to Georgiana's presence.
This is my favourite chapter so far........
Let's hope the magic of Pemberley does not take too long to work on this couple.
At the very least, a kiss.....soon.
Lovely belen........thank you.
My review of When Duty Calls 
This story has been one of my favorites since I first found JA FF and I am so glad you are back and reposting this story with a twist. I am enjoying each and every chapter, thank you more soon please
Teri
This story is like a mountain range, with the first chapters a series of hills of angst we needed to climb. There were some green and happy valleys where it appeared the two liked each other and would find a way to end their differences, but after every little respite came a higher hill. But now we have reached a lovely plateau with a view of delightful landscape--things are looking good for these two. The chapter before the last was the opposite of angst and the last chapter--better and better.
All the chapters are good, and I would not give up the angst chapers at all. They make by contrast these happy chapters even more deiightful.
Loving it!
Another step closer! The little scene in the carriage was lovely...how will the magic of Pemberley affect them, i can't wait!
A new home and a new beginning now let us hope no one ruins it for them.
Geri
Re: When duty Calls by Belén
lovely post - waking up in Darcy's arms while arriving at Pemberley - dreamy!
Hi girls!
I knew the carriage ride scene would be sigh inducing. It’s one of my favourites and it always make me smile whenever I read it. That one and the picnic scene, but I won’t say anything else so I will not spoil it for those who never read this story before.
PatM: Darcy in Elizabeth’s bed? Mmmmh, not yet.
Sandy: I’m happy for you! After so much angst this chapter is so uplifting.
Deidra: Thanks! A kiss … not yet.
Teri: Thank you! I’m happy you are enjoying the rewrite.
Maria Hope: Loved your analogy! Now we are in the plateau, watching the beautiful valley with lots of lovely buttercups blossoming in the spring. Will we have a summer storm?
Gio: I don’t know what it is about Pemberley, it always makes things chage for the better.
Geri: well, things happen, you know? But nothing that can’t be fixed.
Laura: yes, waking up in Darcy’s arms, in the carriage on the way to Pemberley. Every fangirl’s dream!
Thanks girls, you are great!
Belén
I love how every day you show them moving just a bit closer to each other. That is so charming and more comforting to Elizabeth than just having him demand more of her all at once. Waking up in the carriage with his arms around her was definitely a swoon-worthy moment!
Lucy: definitely swoon-worthy! From now on, they’ll move forward slowly but steadily
Marina: Welcome to Mrs. Darcy! I’m so happy you are enjoying my story. Like Austen? *Blushes* ‘tis too much, thanks! I usually update every Saturday or Sunday, so you’ll have to wait a little for the next instalment.
Hugs
Belén
Welcome to Mrs. Darcy, Wendi! And thank you so much for your nice words. I hope to hear more from you soon.
Chapter 16 is up, my dears. Enjoy!
First, I need to tell you that, after trying it four times, the link published here does not work. I did a search for the Mrs. Darcy website and was finally able to read this chapter.
I'm afraid Darcy and Elizabeth are both suffering from incorrect assumptions about how the other feels, or doesn't feel. She would be receptive to his attentions, but he doesn't think she would. They are reading far too much in the other's gestures, etc.
One of them will have to make the first move, and it may have to be Elizabeth. She said some very harsh words to him on their wedding night, so their coming together may be left up to her. I can understand Darcy pulling back and misunderstanding her, but I also understand her fear that he could not love her after what she said to him.
Ah, so Elizabeth settles into Pemberley and sees her husband in his natural habitat--and if she was already having some inkling that he was not such a beast, now it's case closed.
But what happens next--I like the way you depict their present contentment still overhung by the cloud of what came before:
After so many fights and misunderstandings, of wounding words exchanged in a fit of anger, she could not expect him to hold her in the same estimation. Darcy had loved her once, but what if this feeling had been destroyed by her past offences?
He is polite, civil--and we readers know he wants to do more--but she is an innocent who cannot read the signs. Troublesome impasse that comes with the territory--how will they ford it?
I am eagerly looking forward to see. . .
These 2 are so embroiled in their misunderstandings that they can't see that they both want the same thing!
Time for a BIG heart-to-heart, I think!
I loved the part about the kite! It just added something more to the playfulness of all 3.
Thanks Belen! I'll be waiting for next weekend to get here very fast!
I really enjoyed reading about the picnic but feel the use of the word Prairie to describe an English meadow or field a bit off putting. I may be wrong but I have always thought a Prairie was an American description for a treeless plain.
Looking forward to Elizabeth finally becoming Darcy's wife
That was beautiful exquisite ....torture.
Agh!...they need to communicate......very soon.
I loved the picnic scene.......Elizabeth's perusal of Darcy on the blanket and Darcy's obvious awareness of her doing so. So sensual.
Elizabeth, while still coming to terms that she is now hopelessly in love with her husband, is petrified that he does not now love her.
In Elizabeth's mind, why should he? She has been perfectly horrid to him.
Someone has to make the first move....soon.
Thank you belen for this exquisite torture.
Ah...if only Mrs Reynolds did not interrupt and Lizzy might really get a kiss! And there goes a missed opportunity.... Oh well, I'm sure patient Darcy will find some way to have private moments with Lizzy as long as he doesn't give up. And yes! Finally Lizzy acknowleged her love for Darcy, that is a good start
Lovely chapter! The more they misunderstand each other, the more I am thrilled! The best of romance is yet to come!
Amazing Belen! I am ever ready for your coming chapters; decided to be romantically entertained.lol. as always! And by the way, I like your approach in your story.It progress in a subtle way.(Oh, not so hasty, if you please!)
Thanks and cheers!
Lynn
p.s. I'm just wondering in your future chapters - if you have additional new characters that could form a jealousy between the two? That would be more thrilling!
Lovely chapter! Lynn
p.s. I'm just wondering in your future chapters - if you have additional new characters that could form a jealousy between the two? That would be more thrilling!
Putting in my two cents, I think these two have gone through enough misunderstanding without having to face doubts about the other's fidelity. If the writer wants to go this way, of course, I'm down with whatever she decides. But if we are voting beforehand, I don't like the idea of jealousy. Their story is about their coming to understanding and feeling secure with each other. They know they are married for life so how could either of them in good conscience now contemplate a different match or an affair--I mean, realistically, such things do happen. Rather than furthering trust, the thought that either wants someone else would destroy it--not romantic, in my view.
And, I repeat, I am prepared to change my mind if Belen decides it is their story. I understand this story has already been written so readers can probably not sway you in any direction you are not already planning to take.
Things are moving along swimmingly. I loved the kite scene and the picnic and the wood-chopping contest. Too bad he couldn't be shirtless but that would not have been proper. Well hopefully E will get to see him shirtless soon!
Belen what a nice chapter. Lizzy will have to realize that she needs to make the first move if they are to progress in their marriage.
Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Geri
Re: When duty Calls by Belén
Hey Girls! I’m so happy you are enjoying these happier chapters.
PatM: You’re right, someone needs to take the first step, the problem is they are both too uncertain of the other’s feelings to try.
Maria Hope: Don’t worry, I’m not following the jealousy route. Like you, I think that jealousy only makes things worst when the relationship is not solid enough.
Sandy: I’m glad you like the kite scene! It’s new. These characters are always so stiff that it was nice to write them in a more relaxed attitude.
Susan: Thanks for the tip! I’m not a native English speaker so I learned something new today.
Kate: Dary is truly the most patient guy in the world. And he’ll have his reward soon.
Deirdra: If you liked this picnic scene, wait for the next one, it’s even better. We’ll even have a wet shirt in that one.
Gio: I know, it’s frustrating, isn’t it? Timing is everything now and Mrs.R chose to show up at the least favourable moment.
Lynne: Thank you! One of the reasons why their marriage failed from the beginning is because they rushed things (at least Darcy did!) so now they need this slow progression to get things right this time. These two will learn from their mistakes but not as fast as we would like!
Lucy: shirtless darcy. Sigh. I wish I could tell you she will see him shirtless soon, but I can’t.
Geri: Thank you! Someone will make a move soon. Just a little more patience!
Thanks
Belén
"If you liked this picnic scene, wait for the next one, it’s even better. We’ll even have a wet shirt in that one."
The story is developing wonderfully!! I cannot wait for the picnic scene you mention above! You have me on the edge of my seat now! (Though the question in the end is why I am in anticipation - I feel like I am Meg Ryan's character in "You've Got Mail", always wondering if Darcy and Elizabeth will actually end up together...) You have made this "what if" a delight and I love your easy writing style.
Thank you for a lovely chapter!
Tallfleur: Thanks! Sometimes I forget that there are many readers who never read this story before and don’t know the story behind certain scenes. I used to post a disclaimer with every post in the past (here I sent the story to Renée and she uploads it) so there’s not an introduction from the author in every chapter. So I’ll tell you what so special about that second picnic scene (at least I consider it special). That’s the first scene I imagined for WDC. It’s a lovely moment between our beloved couple that is the prelude for a great change in their relationship. Once I was sure that that was what I wanted, I sketched the entire story around it. I thought, ‘well, now I have to get these two to this scene, married, but without consummation and with unresolved issues between them’. I started from the beginning and here we are!
Mary: don’t worry, you are excellent at commenting! Gem? Wow, Thanks! *blushes*. When I first read the novel I thought that it was a pity that D&E spent the majority of the story separated. The premise of WDC is to follow a similar plot but where the characters are forced to remain together and deal with their pride and prejudice while living under the same roof.
Hugs & kisses for everyone
Belén
"Lord Archer was gone and Elizabeth was left to meditate about what just happened. With great consternation, she realized that her husband had purposely avoided the word 'wife' during the introduction with the other gentleman. 'I may be married to you, but I will never be your wife' she told him on their wedding night. She never imagined her words would be taken in such a way! Oh, how much pain he had caused him! Elizabeth was deeply mortified and consumed by remorse. Would he ever be able to forgive her? '
That part always brings tears to my eyes, I love this story, all I can say is more please!!!
Teri
Teri
What I like about that part you mentioned is that Elizabeth really realizes the impact her words had had on Darcy. The poor man was really traumatized by her statement, so much that he can't say the word aloud!
Re: When duty Calls by Belén
hi i don't usually like to read WIPs since im very impatient to finish the story once Ive started it...but now im hooked on three WIP stories including this one and im on the edge of my seat, constantly checking the site if there are new posts...your story is so truly beautiful belen, so pretty pleeease pleeease post soon...
Thank you Apples!
Just sent the chapter to Renée so I guess you'll be able to read an update soon.
Hugs
Be
Chapter 17 is up, my dears. Enjoy!
Re: When duty Calls by Belén
Another exquisitely written chapter, belen. Beautiful.
The sexual tension between these two seems to be racheted up in every chapter. Lizzy is giving all the signs that she wants Darcy but he is so afraid that he might be, again, reading the signs wrong.
The mirror image you wrote of them, looking out onto the night sky and very nearly coming through the door to the other's room, was superbly written. Very visual. I could see them. They were real.
Lizzy has, sort of laid down the gauntlet, with the very brief kiss. The ball is in Darcy's court......
So, belen is next week going to include 'THE PICNIC'.
Can't wait.................. but I suspect the spectre of Lydia and Wickham might raise it's ugly head.
Any chance of you posting earlier belen......pretty please?
At last, Lizzy made a move, and it sure made Darcy (and me) very happy! Hopefully, this will lead to him making the next one.
Belan, you said something about another picnic in an earlier statement, and I got the impression it was a turning point for them. I'll have to go back and read your replies. Is the picnic mentioned in this chapter the one you referred to?
I'm on edge of my seat waiting for your next post. Their "courtship" is such sweet agony.
Both looking at the night sky and trying to determine what to do, beautifully written Belen. They are so afraid to take a chance but Elizabeth did kiss him. Now we know Wickham and Lydia are going to throw a monkey wrench in this some how. More please irene
"Sweet agony" is right. Darcy and Elizabeth each standing at their shared bedroom door, each afraid to turn the knob. This is moving slowly and I am loving every torturous minute. So, so good. I guess I am a glutton for punishment. . . But it really is so romantic to see them each care so much but at the same time not want to push too fast for fear of losing their footing. Or, is that cowardly? I don't know, but I am for sure loving these chapters when they want each other and each take preciously halting steps to end the stalemate.
However, let us not forget the other storm clouds on the horizon. Here's a funny--and scary-- image.
Stay out of mischief? Why am I absolutely certain that won't happen?
Ohhh Lydia. Yet again you are to be a spanner in the works. How unfortunate. I have a feeling that our couple will not have reached an understanding of each other by the time something goes wrong...
But she kissed him!! Eeeeee!!!
I love this story!
Oh so romantic! Lovely chapter Belén - lovely how D&E are falling for one another. Thank you for sharing your story with us (I sure wish you would post more often than once a week).
Cheers,
Julia B
It is so sweet how they both want the same things but are too shy to say so. Love the Gardner kiddies. Very lovely!
A kiss and he let it go and didn't kiss her back. Another sleepless night.
More soon please
Geri
Great! Finally someone is taking a step forward, bravo Lizzy! Am glad they are a step closer to each other.....I only fear that they are not able to come to a understanding before Lydia's fiasco though! All these pecks Lizzy is giving, i hope the next one Darcy will be able to turn it into a full-fledged kiss
I’m so happy that you liked this chapter, my dear readers, for it was difficult to write. I wasn’t very ‘into it’ in the first revision so it did not come out as good as I would have liked. My wonderful beta sent it back saying that I could do much better than that so I spent the whole Saturday polishing it, especially the ‘mirror’ scene that everyone seemed to appreciate so much.
Sandy: Tension indeed! You are right, now the ball is in Darcy’s court. When will strike back? Sooner than you think, but the match won't be over.
Deirdra: Unfortunately D&E are too sensible about their relationship to read properly the other’s signs. They have to overcome a few more obstacles to be able to do it.
patM: Yes, that’s the picnic I mentioned in a previous post. What else can I say about it? Just two words: ‘WET DARCY’.
Irene: Wickham and Lydia are known to mess things up at the least appropriate time. This story is no different.
Maria Hope. I guess these two characters are so traumatized that they can’t think beyond their own guilt. They’ll learn how to communicate, but not just yet.
Kate: it is unfortunate, but the good part is that if everything is resolved now, the story will end.
JuliaB: Thank you! I like this part, like you said, is so romantic and yet there is a lot of tension, what makes it more interesting to write and read.
Lucy: the kids are fun. And one of them will play a very important role in the following chapter.
Geri: when I first posted this story, someone posted a comment that said ‘I can’t believe she kissed him and Darcy stood there like a retarded ape and didn’t go after her’ or something along those lines. So I changed it a bit and detailed his motivations to not to jump into her bed and ravish her like any other red blooded male would do. He rushed things so much at the beginning and he just doesn’t want to make the same mistake. It’s kind of frustrating, but that’s the way it is.
Gio: Lizzy took the lead. Now it’s Darcy’s turn. There will be some action before the Lydia fiasco shows its ugly head.
Thank you girls! (and boys, if there are any in these forums) You are fantastic readers.
Belén
i think lizzy & darcy need to sit down & tried to work out all their problems before them before they finally become husband & wife. i liked the part when both lizzy & darcy both stood by their bedchamber doors wondering if they should come in it remined me of a scene from a soap opera.
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